metaphor practice

[NotaNuffian]

That's a little harsh on the Chinese.

You been living in the same world as everyone on Earth?

That ain't harsh, that's the truth. And it hurts alot more for the chinese citizens to constantly doubt the companies in their own nation.

 

[Thekherham]

She's the apple of my eye.

 

[Kidd_Wadsworth]

She's the apple of my eye.

Nah, more original please. Try again.

 

[Thekherham]

Wishes are fool's gold.
From a work in progress:

The lie was out the water, and he couldn’t toss it back in.

 

[Kidd_Wadsworth]

Wishes are fool's gold.
From a work in progress:

The lie was out the water, and he couldn’t toss it back in.

The lie was out of the water and he couldn't toss it back in. Should "of" be in there?

 

[Thekherham]

Thekherham said:


The lie was out the water, and he couldn’t toss it back in.

The lie was out of the water and he couldn't toss it back in. Should "of" be in there?

Oops. You're right.