What would you expect after reading this synopsis? Honest opinion.

[ToweringGoose]

Reincarnator, Forest Warden, and God's Shard Guard were a few of his many titles, the last high elf. But it matters no more...

His world turned grey and something broke inside of him on that accursed day. He only cared for them. The young, the old. The men, the women. But they spared none. They showed no mercy, all of them were killed. Burnt. Pierced. Torn to pieces... And because of what? Some greed they labeled as a necessity...

The world turned grey. Nothing mattered to him. Nothing after he saw the once colorful elven village lay in ruins, burnt down to ashes. He threw the last bit of humanity he chose to keep. He wanted to feel her warm embrace. To hug her and forget. To hug her and run away. They killed her too, for none was spared.

The world was still colorful, but he chose to repaint it. He brought them back and on that day, on that day he swore vengeance on the world...
...And the undead hordes were soon to emerge, repainting his world anew...

 

[SakeVision]

Interesting, I'd read it

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Make it happen. It sounds like it would be something I'd read.

 

[YeshuasHeart]

I expect the story to be good after reading the synopsis. Good luck on your story though.

 

[ToweringGoose]

Make it happen. It sounds like it would be something I'd read.

Should I give some backstory?
All right I'll give some backstory. (No, I'm not hyped about my own story lol)

[REDACTED] sorry future visitors, the person it was intended for already read it haha.

sorry if I talked a lot lol.

I expect the story to be good after reading the synopsis. Good luck on your story though.

Thank you!

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Should I give some backstory?
All right I'll give some backstory. (No, I'm not hyped about my own story lol)

The fantasy world has your generic races and an entity with the level of a god managing the cycle of reincarnation. The entity is dying and so it spread some sort of Shards, big crystals basically of solidified mana, that will integrate into the planet over the next thousand years and form some network that would take its place in reincarnating the souls.

Anyways, this entity summoned the mc from earth and gave him the task of protecting the last shard in the middle of a forest for a thousand years, it also gave him access to its mana to defend it. The catch in the story is that the other races have (or don't) smaller shards that would dissolve into the planet before that of the mc. Thus the conflict arise as they wage war to control all the shards and become the strongest race(some shit like 'we are chosen by god now that we have all shards lol). Humans for example, use their shard to train holy priests.

The story starts after the mc's elven village near him in the forest was kidnapped and killed in a crossfire of schemes. Thus the mc turns them into undead by corrupting his shard, which instead of sending souls to reincarnate would collect them for him to raise as undead. Ok no more :p

This story of mine is actually a fork of my main one, where the settings are the same but the genre is kingdom-building and no undead but a new fantasy race :p

Funny thing is: both of them are still sitting in production lol.

sorry if I talked a lot lol.

Thank you!

What is the story name?

 

[ToweringGoose]

What is the story name?

Haven't thought of one yet. As I said, I'm still writing it and I'm taking my time because I got some exams haha.
But the place holder name I have currently is something like Warden of Ruin

 

[Snowyflakes]

Hi! To me, it sounds like an army came and destroyed his homeland from its roots for some stupid reason, and that he used some knowledge of necromancy and brought his people back to life to take back his realm. And that he is suffering after his dead lover.