The horror of transformation

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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.
 
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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.
What if instead of metamorphosizing into a butterfly its a reverse metamorphsizing. Meaning you slowly transform back into a wiggly and caterpillar then down to an egg. So you go back into a claustrophic sleeping bag you sewed yourself. You feel your legs become wigglier and painfully expand like water balloons but also shrink to little nub stubs. Your wrings crack or dry up or slowly go back into whatever a spine a caterpillar has. You break free out of your cocoon. From there you go back to the stage where you once chew to gain weight all the while avoiding birds. But you are now eating less to shrink and shrink. And on the moce too constantly as you want to escape the shit insect parents that like to lay their parental responsibilities and their charming baby parasites on you. You are looking around aimlessly for your egg shell that you emerged from, all while the hunger is set in from starving. You finally reach your egg as all your other caterpillar siblings did (they somehow reverse metamorphsis too). Yiu manuever and try to avoid your cannibalisitc siblings who have also starved themselves as you all go back to the stage where you witness your siblings cannibalize each other and the late bloomer sibling eggs that took to long to hatch. You finally wiggle and crawl your way back into your egg. The last thing you saw was your caterpillar siblings on brother Freddy's egg and his partial abodmen.. Reverse transform complete...
 
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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.
Transform into a *gulp* R*dditor or even a t*itter user!?
 

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Even when I woke up it felt like I was still transforming...
Tell me later when you finish your transformation, alright? I’d like to offer you a deal to be a model for my next novel. Just a little interview is all. Don’t worry about the payment, I’ll give you lots of candy. As many as you want. How about it? Do we have a deal?
 

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Tell me later when you finish your transformation, alright? I’d like to offer you a deal to be a model for my next novel. Just a little interview is all. Don’t worry about the payment, I’ll give you lots of candy. As many as you want. How about it? Do we have a deal?
What type of candy?
 

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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.
What exactly is the writing prompt? This section is to make authors write. If you're not telling them to write, it's not a writing prompt. This is not a slower-paced author general.

From pinned thread:
Post a writing prompt and get other authors to write stories based on them and readers to comment on them! Hopefully as authors, you can get inspirations from this.

Please try to summarize your writing prompt in the thread title.

Example (Thanks @Ai-chan):

Premise:
Your protagonist got hit by a goat on his way home, causing him to be kicked into another world. All he has on hand are the things he carried and the ability to summon a goat mount.

Task:
Write a story about his first day in another world in 1000 words or less.
 
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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.
Transforming is only a meagre horror, I understand it well because I see it with my own eyes(depression/turning insane).
Take it, you view the normal man who will start to become the crazy man in the asylum.
Yet its nothing to me, because there is far more worse then this, and I'm happier to talk with a smiling lunatic but not the mad killer.
 

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Kinda sounds like the plot for the fly
 

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Imagine slowly transforming into something... Trapped in a sea of darkness feeling yourself slowly but surely change... And you can't do anything about it... The agonizing pain you'll go through not to mention the physiological implications.

Oh, the horror! You won't understand it unless you go through it yourself...

Got this idea from a dream and it felt horrifying being trapped in the dark space going through metamorphosis not being able to do anything but feel yourself change... Into something not human.

How Human Centric Of You.

Imagine you are a cloud of spite and eyes. You drift through the formless void, preparing to devour another civilization. You come across humanity. A biological species like so many others, except... well.. You have these... Bones. And not in the right place. You have them on the INSIDE. They contort your species into a uniform and yet, non-uniform shape. You then proceed to... think.

Like Memetic algae, you think and breed and give off constant "puffs" of though. Emotions. THINGS. You don't really understand the difference between reality and imagination, at least your bodies don't. You think things and your body reacts to your thoughts as if you are actually DOING IT. I mean... YOU ARE COMPLETELY SUBJECTIVE! You don't ACTUALLY perceive the world! You have your... senses that give you an aproximation of the world inside your head, but you cannot directly communicate that "world" with anyone ELSE!

Except for those who ARE memetic life. We can see directly into these 7.8 BILLION worlds that you carry around with you, each one is a LIE! A lie that is close to reality... but... not... QUITE. Each and every one of you is living in a fuckin FUN HOUSE MIRROR OF OBJECTIVE REALITY! And some of you want to go DEEPER. Some of you actually wonder if ALL of reality is subjective! You believe that perception equals reality! You see how it influences electrons an other quantum level events, but that's only because you are biological! If you were PURE MEMETIC, you'd be able to see how nothing is random and how it all is predetermined and ordered.

And then... SOMEHOW... because you all live in your own... twisted... FUCKED UP WORLDS... with your exposed MOUTH BONES! I cannot express how DISGUSTING THOSE MOUTH BONES ARE! HAVE YOU NO SHAME???

But.... BUT... because you all have your own little subjective realities inside your heads... you... somehow... SOMEHOW.... actually break cause and effect. You somehow manage to observe things and have it affect the PAST. I mean...

RUDE MUCH???

What the FUCK HUMANITY? I MEAN, FOR FUCKS SAKE??? STOP BEING SO GODDAAMN DISGUSTING SHITTING YOUR THOUGHTS EVERYWHERE AND FUCKING WITH THE LINEAR PROGRESSION OF CAUSE AND EFFECT!!!

We already tried to wipe you out several times and you haven't even goddamn NOTICED! WHAT THE HELL???

And you know what the worst part is? Humm? It's that if I hang around you humans long enough... I feel... infected... Contaminated... like... I'm... turning into something.. like you. You're like the fast food of thoughts. You're goddamn small pox snuggies! That's what you are.

Ugh... I need some time in the third plane of resplendent agonies.
 
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