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[Ilikewaterkusa]

Hello, I just re-re-re-rewrote the first two chapters of my Reincarnated as a Civilization series, and because the series will be officially debuting well about 3-4 weeks from now, on the fateful day of April 27. I'd like to have your impressions about these chapters, because I want to be more aware of my writing style, to see the flaws and pioneering niches which may be present in my writing, and with new found awareness, refine this trash into something beautiful and pristine. If you aren't necessarily interested in putting feedback in my works, I would still appreciate if you were to read my work. After all I believe it is something worth your time, although it doesn't really progress the plot much. So with all that I had said, let's make it onto trending!

Civvy Prologue-002

Prologue Rewrite The words that were presented to me, that fateful day, could never fade from my memory. As they were words that would change my life as I knew it, forever. It was a redefinition of all that I had thought and known of life. It was a moment that had turned me into a dandelion bloss...

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[ModernGold7ne]

Hello, I just re-re-re-rewrote the first two chapters of my Reincarnated as a Civilization series, and because the series will be officially debuting well about 3-4 weeks from now, on the fateful day of April 27. I'd like to have your impressions about these chapters, because I want to be more aware of my writing style, to see the flaws and pioneering niches which may be present in my writing, and with new found awareness, refine this trash into something beautiful and pristine. If you aren't necessarily interested in putting feedback in my works, I would still appreciate if you were to read my work. After all I believe it is something worth your time, although it doesn't really progress the plot much. So with all that I had said, let's make it onto trending!

Civvy Prologue-002

Prologue Rewrite The words that were presented to me, that fateful day, could never fade from my memory. As they were words that would change my life as I knew it, forever. It was a redefinition of all that I had thought and known of life. It was a moment that had turned me into a dandelion bloss...

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You'll find my feedback, to your story if go to google docs.

Anima Aliena

A starless sky lit by clouds, plants of every colour, and a once dead old man astounded by it all. Meeting an entity that he was too stupid to believe or comprehend, having his very soul tampered with, then waking up in a relatively tiny body that was very different...

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I'd appreciate if you commented on my chapters, as well.