An author looking for a feed back on the first the two chapters

Elixer_Yuu

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Yo there, i m new to SH and I'd like some feedback on the first two chapters of my work.
It's dark fantasy with some pretty depressing elements and it's my first time writing something this dark, so yea, feel free to criticize and voice ur opinions

 
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