The pirate captain

[Ymadthepirate]

My series The Pirate Captain has just finished it's first volume a few minutes ago ,and i was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback

 

[Dudealien]

Link the series :)

 

[Ymadthepirate]

k

Link the series :)

The Pirate Captain

A boy was once a slave forced to work for a evil pirate. until, he hires a mercenary and becomes the captain of said ship driven to get revenge for his father. Watch as he may go a little less heroic.

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Dudealien]

k

The Pirate Captain

A boy was once a slave forced to work for a evil pirate. until, he hires a mercenary and becomes the captain of said ship driven to get revenge for his father. Watch as he may go a little less heroic.

www.scribblehub.com

Thanks. I’ll read it as soon as I finish the series I’m currently reading.

 

[Ymadthepirate]

Thanks. I’ll read it as soon as I finish the series I’m currently reading.

Sweet don't forget to tell me how you feel about the story

 

[Dudealien]

Sweet don't forget to tell me how you feel about the story

Will do, Captain :)

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

Posting this here as a bookmark, if I don't peek my skull into your story in a week, ping me.

 

[Ymadthepirate]

Posting this here as a bookmark, if I don't peek my skull into your story in a week, ping me.

K got it I'll probably read your book

 

[Agentt]

*pats*
Post this on story feedback in future

 

[Ymadthepirate]

k

 

[RepresentingCaution]

it's

 

[Elixer_Yuu]

View attachment 12737

Now that's what I call helpful kek

 

[Ymadthepirate]

true

 

[Deeprotsorcerer]

Left my criticism in a comment on ch 1. All in all, it just isn't there yet, but the fact that you even made an attempt puts you head and shoulders above the cowards with a book in their hearts that never tried to write anything. Don't be discouraged by anything I or anyone else says.