Review Swap with me!

[Hexenblume]

Hiya! Is anyone here up for a review swap? I'll read around 20-25k words of your story and leave a review based on style, characters, and storyline. I'd prefer it if you could do the same too, but honestly just a small write up of what you liked and disliked about my story is okay too!

Here's my story.

The Harmless Sweetie is Far From Harmless [Under Editing]

One hundred and fifty years ago, The Witch of Despair fell into a slumber. Fires burnt like raging hellfire as kingdoms fell and mountains turned to plains, her agonized scream and cry over her betrayal resounded throughout the Isles. And her final wish, all but forgotten to the people of...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Deleted member 1244]

Sige, try ko.

It's moments like these I realise I am fully out of touch with mordern internet lingo.

No longer can I decipher or even make vague heads or tail of what short hand, acrynom, or jargon is being used. Or what that review is actually saying... good or bad.

Oh well, the world changes.

This is very efficient, tho. Regardless of what it is.

 

[Deleted member 42060]

It's moments like these I realise I am fully out of touch with mordern internet lingo.

No longer can I decipher or even make vague heads or tail of what short hand, acrynom, or jargon is being used. Or what that review is actually saying... good or bad.

Oh well, the world changes.

This is very efficient, tho. Regardless of what it is.

It speaks a lot about society.

 

[greyblob]

It's moments like these I realise I am fully out of touch with mordern internet lingo.

No longer can I decipher or even make vague heads or tail of what short hand, acrynom, or jargon is being used. Or what that review is actually saying... good or bad.

Oh well, the world changes.

This is very efficient, tho. Regardless of what it is.

it's obvious it's not english. 5 seconds on google says its filipino

 

[Deleted member 1244]

5 seconds on google says its filipino

Really? Are you sure? I have no idea.

5 sec on google gave me

SIGE™. With a 50-year pedigree, SIGE S.p.a. is a premium Italian manufacturer of intelligent pantry storage and waste management solutions.

 

[Deleted member 58005]

It's moments like these I realise I am fully out of touch with mordern internet lingo.

No longer can I decipher or even make vague heads or tail of what short hand, acrynom, or jargon is being used. Or what that review is actually saying... good or bad.

Oh well, the world changes.

This is very efficient, tho. Regardless of what it is.

Its Filipino, don't worry. You're not missing out

 

[Hexenblume]

Sige, try ko.

How did you even know I was filipino- also thanks! What's the story you want me to review for you?

It's moments like these I realise I am fully out of touch with mordern internet lingo.

No longer can I decipher or even make vague heads or tail of what short hand, acrynom, or jargon is being used. Or what that review is actually saying... good or bad.

Oh well, the world changes.

This is very efficient, tho. Regardless of what it is.

Its just filipino don't worry too much ^^

 

[Deleted member 58005]

That's a lot of "oh god," btw haha

 

[Hexenblume]

That's a lot of "oh god," btw haha

Yeah ur super right I'm planning to change the naming style of the chapters after the tenth one lmao

 

[Anon_Y_Mousse]

You know, never done a review swap before, so I may as well try it out since I'm crawling out of hiatus soon. I'll get back to you in a day or two. Where would you like the review to be sent?

Edit: for my story chapter 7-8 would be a good place to stop.

 

[Deleted member 42060]

How did you even know I was filipino- also thanks! What's the story you want me to review for you?


Its just filipino don't worry too much ^^

Oh, don’t worry about that. I’m not too confident about my story. Rereviewhin ko nalang yung sayo unilaterally. 20,000 words? Bet.

 

[Deleted member 1244]

Its Filipino, don't worry. You're not missing out

I see, i am a bit confused cuz "sige" can also be danish for "say" now that i had a look.

Regardless, i will leave this discussion, i dont think id do too well in a biligual review dialogue, needing to go from english to Filipino, and filipino to english while trying to talk about in "medias res", and story structures... It will make my head explode.

Still... i was only reclusively hanging out on my profile page for a few months, and i come back to find the forum is now mulit lingual. Thats a massive surprise.

Back to puns and amusing tweets!

 

[Anon_Y_Mousse]

I see, i am a bit confused cuz "sige" can also be danish for "say" now that i had a look.

Regardless, i will leave this discussion, i dont think id do too well in a biligual review dialogue, needing to go from english to Filipino, and filipino to english while trying to talk about in "medias res", and story structures... It will make my head explode.

Still... i was only reclusively hanging out on my profile page for a few months, and i come back to find the forum is now mulit lingual. Thats a massive surprise.

Back to puns and amusing tweets!

Nah I'm quite sure the english-only rule is still in place. Though lately I've seen a lot of Filipinos on the forum.

 

[Hexenblume]

You know, never done a review swap before, so I may as well try it out since I'm crawling out of hiatus soon. I'll get back to you in a day or two. Where would you like the review to be sent?

Edit: for my story chapter 7-8 would be a good place to stop.

Understood! It would be nice if you could post it on the actual story! But if you're not comfy with that you could just send it to me.

Oh, don’t worry about that. I’m not too confident about my story. Rereviewhin ko nalang yung sayo unilaterally. 20,000 words? Bet.

Ooh, okay then, thank you! My story isn't 20k words yet as most if it is still under editing. But if you do change your mind and want me to review your story I'm just a dm away!

I see, i am a bit confused cuz "sige" can also be danish for "say" now that i had a look.

Regardless, i will leave this discussion, i dont think id do too well in a biligual review dialogue, needing to go from english to Filipino, and filipino to english while trying to talk about in "medias res", and story structures... It will make my head explode.

Still... i was only reclusively hanging out on my profile page for a few months, and i come back to find the forum is now mulit lingual. Thats a massive surprise.

Back to puns and amusing tweets!

Oh don't worry! Being bilingual isn't a requirement, I was surprised when someone spoke my native language too lmao, but if you do want to do a review swap, again, I'm just a do away.

You know, never done a review swap before, so I may as well try it out since I'm crawling out of hiatus soon. I'll get back to you in a day or two. Where would you like the review to be sent?

Edit: for my story chapter 7-8 would be a good place to stop.

By the way, what's the story you'd want me to review?

 

[Anon_Y_Mousse]

By the way, what's the story you'd want me to review?

The one in my signature, Reincarnation of the Great Conqueror.

 

[Hexenblume]

The one in my signature, Reincarnation of the Great Conqueror.

Understood! I'll write one up when I finish reading, thank you for the swap!

 

[killwrites]

I see kokomi has gone from reading xingqiu's book to writing a book

I'm up for a review swap, will do it on your story page if you don't mind. Can you review mine in exchange? Up to the end of the first Act (volume) is fine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/354995/our-crusade-on-this-clusterfck-of-a-world-begins/

 

[Hexenblume]

I see kokomi has gone from reading xingqiu's book to writing a book

I'm up for a review swap, will do it on your story page if you don't mind. Can you review mine in exchange? Up to the end of the first Act (volume) is fine! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/354995/our-crusade-on-this-clusterfck-of-a-world-begins/

I'd love to! I'll get to it after reviewing the other book, thank you for the swap!

 

[Hexenblume]

The one in my signature, Reincarnation of the Great Conqueror.

Just wanted to notify you just in case you haven't seen yet, I've posted the review! Once again, thank you for the swap!

 

[EternalSunset0]

Nah I'm quite sure the english-only rule is still in place. Though lately I've seen a lot of Filipinos on the forum.

Don't worry, they're everywhere. I think it's the social media capital of the world or something. Not sure if that's literal and fact-based but having lived here for two decades, it certainly feels so.