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What if a world existed where the alien invader's looking for residents on earth, eldritch horrors, symbiotes, sapient zombies, symbiotes, parasites, demons and what ever else accomplished their goal of riding themself of the human filth.



edit: Alright cause a commenter got confused I guess I should put this here, in this scenario all humans are dead, they no longer exist. They are extinct and are thought of like ancient dinosaur. The creatures that now fun the earth killed every last one if them. Alright, good.



I wonder how a story will go with this plot line with the way of the humans sorta affecting the way the new world order is run by these new beings that rule the world?

If you were to come up with a story like this how'll you write such a thing? Would it just be humans reskined? would you have to get i to the heads of these new creatures and hoe they interact without a dumb evil motive? Would the way the world is portrayed before affect their involvement? How would nature, culture or technology be affected? How differently will the world run? Will the story be focused on the destruction the specie's brought so many years ago of will it focus on a select few characters but you'll make this plot line show through out the story? Will this revelation impact the story in any way or will it a fun thing that happened doesn't matter anymore cause the human filth is gone so the story should move on.
 
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Ultraman but the way you transform is by fisting your penis and every episode is about the struggle of a really strong burly guy trying to fit his whole forearm into his pea sized peen.
 

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Hololive in a nutshell I guess? I dunno but the plot you kinda give, shifts my attention towards a certain Vtubers in a way I guess?
 

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Hello enby pal's, gal's and guys

What if a world existed where the alien invader's looking for residents on earth, eldritch horrors, symbiotes, sapient zombies, symbiotes, parasites, demons and what ever else accomplished their goal of riding themself of the human filth.


I wonder how a story will go with this plot line with the way of the humans sorta affecting the way the new world order is run by these new beings that rule the world?

If you were to come up with a story like this how'll you write such a thing? Would it just be humans reskined? would you have to get i to the heads of these new creatures and hoe they interact without a dumb evil motive? Would the way the world is portrayed before affect their involvement? How would nature, culture or technology be affected? How differently will the world run? Will the story be focused on the destruction the specie's brought so many years ago of will it focus on a select few characters but you'll make this plot line show through out the story? Will this revelation impact the story in any way or will it a fun thing that happened doesn't matter anymore cause the human filth is gone so the story should move on.
Things wouldn’t change that much, they would just infiltrate the power and cultural stricture and continue spreading degeneracy and stuff. Just a faster decline of civilization would happen
 

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Ever heard about reptiloids secretly controlling the world? That's fake - lesser demons spread it to cover their operations. And you better not know what is the true source of all that cat-girl appreciation culture...

That's how I'd write it - I'd take current reality, modify it slightly so reptiloids will not be hitting my door the moment it's published, embellish a bit and attribute various historical events and cultural trends to various forces working behind the scenes.
 

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aliens took over hosts. some hosts survived and overtook the aliens, gaining superpowers. the population is down to a forth of its original number. queue refugee cities, freedom fighters, awakening, politics, etc. you'll need distinct personality traits for each new race though.
 

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aliens took over hosts. some hosts survive

and overtook the aliens, gaining superpowers. the population is down to a forth of its original number. queue refugee cities, freedom fighters, awakening, politics, etc. you'll need distinct personality traits for each new race though.
Ey ey ey! Blob, what's this shit! I said the aliens and parasites won, there no humans so there'll be not refugee camps or rebels. They dead.
There's only one sapient species since the humans are gone.
Also I always hated that trait for each specie's, these are people not npcs or mobs not everyone of them same.
 
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You mean like this?
Yes, but just one problem. The gosh darn humans still live. They're is already enough stories with them I want them gone and replaced with something more exotic and different something.
Sounds like a nice premise though, but the gosh darn humans surviving really wasn't what I wanted.
 

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Ey ey ey! Blob, what's this shit! I said the aliens and parasites won, there no humans so there'll be not refugee camps or rebels. They dead.
There's only one sapient species since the humans are gone.
Also I always hated that trait for each specie's, these are people not npcs or mobs not everyone of them same.
this is your fault. i read your post like 4 times trying to make sense of it. put some effort into it.
and races do have special traits. i'm not talking about making a single template but eldritch horror should be completely different (personality wise) from a bunch of zombies.
 

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Yes, but just one problem. The gosh darn humans still live. They're is already enough stories with them I want them gone and replaced with something more exotic and different something.
Sounds like a nice premise though, but the gosh darn humans surviving really wasn't what I wanted.
I've written a similar premise before but the story ends by the new exotic aliens following the exact route where humans took. They segregate via unsavoury traits that can be perceived with their primary senses (for humans it's sight, so many for aliens it's touch or biological frequency or something), expand, conquer, and at the end of the day, end by either complete totalitarian state or a nuclear winter where mass extinction is the only way.

The way I write the story is by doing the same as the Avatar-type-plot, where I simply replace the aboriginal race with humans and vice versa. You can get rid of a race, but you can't beat the rules of nature. Like a circle of life, Ourosborus (I think I butchered the spelling) type of deal.

There may be changes in culture and species, but the fact remains that there is no group out there that won't fall under the pressure of its weight.
 

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I've written a similar premise before but the story ends by the new exotic aliens following the exact route where humans took. They segregate via unsavoury traits that can be perceived with their primary senses (for humans it's sight, so many for aliens it's touch or biological frequency or something), expand, conquer, and at the end of the day, end by either complete totalitarian state or a nuclear winter where mass extinction is the only way.

The way I write the story is by doing the same as the Avatar-type-plot, where I simply replace the aboriginal race with humans and vice versa. You can get rid of a race, but you can't beat the rules of nature. Like a circle of life, Ourosborus (I think I butchered the spelling) type of deal.

There may be changes in culture and species, but the fact remains that there is no group out there that won't fall under the pressure of its weight.
Huh, I actually never do that the ones I plan to write had to do with various parasites and another story with various demons replacing humans that are separated by kingdoms but I never really dud racial difference it's more of which one remained in that location during the invasion that much as a tactical advantage fkr the race, wasn't much of a segregation thing and more what happened everything was said and done.
Of course there is no problem with races traveling from place to place or hate for being a different dub race but most kingdoms are at war from time to time, so travel is a bit of hassle it you're heavily involved with said kingdom.
 

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Yes, but just one problem. The gosh darn humans still live. They're is already enough stories with them I want them gone and replaced with something more exotic and different something.
Sounds like a nice premise though, but the gosh darn humans surviving really wasn't what I wanted.
Well, in this one, humans have evolved into three separate species:
 

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What's the point? Swapping humans for someone else?
Well yes, that's exactly it, it's more of my preference of nonhumans, but it could also serve narrative significance, like stated above the humans and their way of life, history and tech could shape this new world on various ways with no humans being around to explain shit, the new species just has to figure but out by themselves. But I set the timeline way into the future ahead they've already (re)built civilization fir themselves.
If we can get interspecies harems, we too can recieve interspecies Nazis.
I mean I set the canonical time line where humans no longer exists, so past interspecies Nazis.
 

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Well yes, that's exactly it, it's more of my preference of nonhumans, but it could also serve narrative significance, like stated above the humans and their way of life, history and tech could shape this new world on various ways with no humans being around to explain shit, the new species just has to figure but out by themselves.
Then how did they manage to wipe humans out?
But I set the timeline way into the future ahead they've already (re)built civilization fir themselves.
Then what's even the point?

From what I understand, wiped-out humans don't affect the story at all. You can summarize this 'premise' in the story with two, three sentences. You can take wiped-out humans away, and it won't change a thing. What's the point? You might argue that new ruling species will study humans. Well, why can't they study another different species they wiped out? I don't understand this, perhaps you might elaborate, or I'm wrong somewhere.
 
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