Hey guys- i would like some reviews

[jokij]

I'm just testing out some stuff, so can you guys go read my novel and give me some reviews:
How To Create Another World

 

[CadmarLegend]

I'm just testing out some stuff, so can you guys go read my novel and give me some reviews:
How To Create Another World

just a tip, but you might want to add in your novel in your signature and hyperlink the title in this post.

(To see what I mean by signature, go look at my post from a PC view. )

 

[jokij]

just a tip, but you might want to add in your novel in your signature and hyperlink the title in this post.

(To see what I mean by signature, go look at my post from a PC view. )

Thank you man

 

[jokij]

How To Create Another World | Scribble Hub

 

[Mr.Grey-Cat]

How To Create Another World | Scribble Hub

maybe work at improving synopsis a little tiny bit, you know? cause what you wrote give no meaning.

try improving your synopsis, cause the only thing it tell is that this is daily life of some scientist.