Do you want to beta read more chapters?The Litrpg elements were fine and the writing was mostly fine. The characters though felt a bit awkward. Might want to revisit that.
Nah, don't really have the time. But you seem to be doing fine.Do you want to beta read more chapters?
For future reference, beta reading is reading chapters that haven't been posted yet, then giving the author feedback before they post publicly. Hence why its called beta. I didn't really need that chapter looked at imo. Thanks anyway though.Nah, don't really have the time. But you seem to be doing fine.