I need an activity in my story

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So I'm kinda in a rut guys I'm in the middle of a resting period before the second wave of the beginning plot of my story but I need a bunch of activities for my group of miscreants to do while I'm waiting for the plot to progress. This part is somewhat important to their characterization and dynamic in the story outside of a fighting scenario so it'll be awesome to get some input
 
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drunken pub brawl.
fund procurement schemes
inter-party shenanigans and weird flexes\bets\dares
 

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So I'm kinna in a rut guys I'm in the middle of a resting period before the second wave of the beginning plot of my story but I need a buch of activities for my group of miscreants to do while I'm waiting for the plot to progress. This part is somewhat important to their characterization and dynamic in the story outside of a fighting scenario so it'll be awesome to get some input
get high as balls
 

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Bounty hunting, a medieval ish type of casino, some sort of auction house, brothel activities, idk
 

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So I'm kinda in a rut guys I'm in the middle of a resting period before the second wave of the beginning plot of my story but I need a bunch of activities for my group of miscreants to do while I'm waiting for the plot to progress. This part is somewhat important to their characterization and dynamic in the story outside of a fighting scenario so it'll be awesome to get some input

I think we need more details. Where are they, and what are they doing? Also, what is a nut-shell description of the participating characters?

I'm pretty sure I could come up with a few things if given that information.
 

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Here are some suggestions off the top of my head
  1. Have them go for a meal or attend a festival and let them have a chat.
  2. Meet a family member of one of the characters, this lets you give some back story to that character
  3. Meet an old rival for one of the characters, like a childhood bully or something (humanizes the characters)
  4. Meet an old crush (If romance is on the table)
  5. Do some charity if the world sucks (Grimreality-style story)
  6. Have a run-in with a nasty noble and prank his ass (If comedy is a focus)
 

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Thanks but that's some teen titans go or regular show level of stupidity, I'm for adult anime adventure comedy
In that case, filler isn't a great idea, right?

Rather than looking for the kind of brainless activities that will pop up when you ask for 'a bunch of activities' try doing things that are important to the characters. Visit family/graves, upgrade equipment, advance hobbies, whatever. Do it right, and you can advance characterization instead of just making something the audience will skip. Do it wrong, and you may as well just do a time skip.
 

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I think we need more details. Where are they, and what are they doing? Also, what is a nut-shell description of the participating characters?

I'm pretty sure I could come up with a few things if given that information.
They are hold up in a rental home for vacation in a scifi fantasy world on break from their 8 month long work trying to relax from their work before going at it again for who knows how long.
They are eight characters in total all extremely horny except for the ace and are all pretty chaotic individuals with an enjoyment in destruction.
 

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They are hold up in a rental home for vacation in a scifi fantasy world on break from their 8 month long work trying to relax from their work before going at it again for who knows how long.
They are eight characters in total all extremely horny except for the ace and are all pretty chaotic individuals with an enjoyment in destruction.
Ok, nut shell description for all 8 please. Something you can deliver verbally in 15 seconds or less. (Approximately 40 words or less.) This is called an elevator pitch. It is actually a characterization exercise any decent author would ask a beginner author to do, so it will probably help you a lot just to give these descriptions.

Also, more details about the location. How large is the town? Any distinguishing characteristics about it? Is there even a town at all? You didn't even specify that. All you said was that they were in a rental home. Is it out there in the middle of nowhere?
 

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They are hold up in a rental home for vacation in a scifi fantasy world on break from their 8 month long work trying to relax from their work before going at it again for who knows how long.
They are eight characters in total all extremely horny except for the ace and are all pretty chaotic individuals with an enjoyment in destruction.
Where is your story?
I searched from your account on the main website and found nothing written.
I looked at your twitter link and the twitter says this account doesn't exist.
 

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Swimsuit/beach/BBQ/Fireworks scene. During that time light hearted character growth.

You said anime, that's what they do in anime.
 

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Ok, nut shell description for all 8 please. Something you can deliver verbally in 15 seconds or less. (Approximately 40 words or less.) This is called an elevator pitch. It is actually a characterization exercise any decent author would ask a beginner author to do, so it will probably help you a lot just to give these descriptions.

Also, more details about the location. How large is the town? Any distinguishing characteristics about it? Is there even a town at all? You didn't even specify that. All you said was that they were in a rental home. Is it out there in the middle of nowhere?
Okay my characters
Hiyou: Psychopathic realist cut off from their emotions and hyper think things making mistakes cause they don't know how people work.
Kiopra: Sweet, relaxed, care giver insecure about their power and incapability.
Ghyuoui: energetic clown scared of failure cares little for peoples lives outside of their friend group always tries to put a smile on his friends face.
Gidohn: The himbo of the group brash and insecure.
Piyori: A slutty gal that likes expensive
stuff constantly trying to have fun, loyal to a fault but petty and has Low self esteem
Tyrew: The calm headed trustworthy one of the group and too care free easy going lazy and relaxed.
Yuio: Impatient adaptive and arrogant

The town they are in is about 3,800 km² mostly famous entertaining adventures that come to kingdom with it being in closer proximity to the boarder of the kingdom the buildings are average sized no tall buildings of any sort except the mayor's mansion the place has lots of stores for entertainment and places you could buy products and a red light district.
Where is your story?
I searched from your account on the main website and found nothing written.
I looked at your twitter link and the twitter says this account doesn't exist.
Not posted it yet still working on the story before I publish it
 
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Hiyou: goes for a walk outside of town
Kiopra: volunteers at a health clinic for the poor
Ghyuoui: gambles
Gidohn: gets dragged on a date with Piyori
Piyori: drags Gidohn on a date, then leaves the bar with some other guy
Tyrew: takes naps
Yuio: wonders where everybody is and tries to keep them out of the group funds
 

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I'm disappointed you didn't add any loli character...


You mentioned that your story is in a sci-fi fantasy world.
I think a world building chapter would be a good choice too. Perhaps, discussing more about the technology tree in that world.
Was there are floating car or ship? If yes, what is the fuel used to make them float? --- or something like that.


You also described your character has flaws in their personality.
This can be expanded by adding a flashback or the reason why they become like that.
For example: Piyori was petty, low self-esteem and likes expensive things because of poverty.
 

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This seems like a really vague question to ask considering not much has been said about the story proper. All I can gather is that this is some kind of adventure story.

In that case, I'm going to be broad about this.

This part is somewhat important to their characterization and dynamic in the story outside of a fighting scenario so it'll be awesome to get some input

In which case, consider this. Look at your notes, or whatever plans you have about the next part of the journey, and then see what you can put in this small break that will improve the plot later down the line. Maybe you have a planned boss that the heroes can't defeat, only for them to pull out something they acquired during this small plot line. Or maybe you can look at what you've written so far and see if there are flaws in characters that need to be fixed, maybe explained, or even further push whatever you have in mind. You can also foreshadow, as in have the characters allude to what is to come.

I'm giving these suggestions under the notion that I personally prefer filler episodes to have some meaning later on. Not that I dislike filler as there are times I do enjoy them, such as beach episodes in anime. I figured if you're going to pause the adventure, then just give us a preview of what is to come within the narrative, or add to what has already been established.

If I can give some example, I'd like to use One Piece, the manga version at least (I haven't watched the anime). Possible spoilers if you are reading it.

I currently read the Water 7 story arc, and that whole arc is about Robin leaving the crew, the Straw Hats being framed, Robin being arrested, and the crew bailing her out, and Franky's story being told alongside. But before all that, the beginning chapters in this story arc are just establishing all this. The crew's ship is in dire need of repairs and they all go exploring. Lufy and Nami are exchanging their treasure for currency and looking at a replacement ship, Sanji and Tony are shopping for food, Zolo is buying a new sword. This may not be exactly filler as there are events happening within that will add up later on to the main plot of the arc, but these small things that can be skipped over have been utilized as a set up for things to come.

Maybe you can do something like that. Just write something that appears mundane, but becomes important later on. Something to keep the reader interested in the plot as a whole while still just giving them bits of mundane personality. The everyday things can be used to further the plot and characters, even if it is filler.

I hope all this helps.
 

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Tournament arcs are usually used.

It doesn't need to be the normal fight kind. Card games or cooking are doable as a breather.
It can also serve as backstory for one character if found as a secret hobby.

Other common option is the beach/onsen episode like already stated.
 

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Okay my characters
Hiyou: Psychopathic realist cut off from their emotions and hyper think things making mistakes cause they don't know how people work.
Kiopra: Sweet, relaxed, care giver insecure about their power and incapability.
Ghyuoui: energetic clown scared of failure cares little for peoples lives outside of their friend group always tries to put a smile on his friends face.
Gidohn: The himbo of the group brash and insecure.
Piyori: A slutty gal that likes expensive
stuff constantly trying to have fun, loyal to a fault but petty and has Low self esteem
Tyrew: The calm headed trustworthy one of the group and too care free easy going lazy and relaxed.
Yuio: Impatient adaptive and arrogant

The town they are in is about 3,800 km² mostly famous entertaining adventures that come to kingdom with it being in closer proximity to the boarder of the kingdom the buildings are average sized no tall buildings of any sort except the mayor's mansion the place has lots of stores for entertainment and places you could buy products and a red light district.

Not posted it yet still working on the story before I publish it

Hmm... if this is the case, my strongest suggestion would be to world-build the town. Stop thinking about how to show off the characters and start thinking about how to show off the town. You will be able to get some characterization in naturally in the form of their responses to whatever details about the town you wind up putting there.

Another idea would be to split them up and take a feather out of Avitar the Last Airbender's cap. Do something similar to the "Tales of Ba-sing-se episode where it was just a bunch of short 5 minute stories about situations all the characters encountered while out and about. (considering this party, it looked like there were at least 3 of them you could send into the redlight district.)

The important thing is to do something that's natural to the tone and character of the novel you are writing.
 
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