Your Lack of Attention!

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Attention! A-Attention... A tension? Hmm... I may have trouble trying to comprehend the lack of attention lately - no pun intended. Continuing on, if you've never met me, I am actually a wandering swordsman whose crafts' inconspicuous to the whole globe - to those asking of it... I say, it is the craft you know nothing of - it is the craft of headstanding!

You see, without headstanding, I could have never achieved a dream that's impossible to some men. Being able to sneak a peek at that charming piece of cloth... I... I... hmm... don't think ill of me please! Anyway, because of your lack of attention - you never become a better person. Sometimes, it takes a year to think about what's really missing about you and what you have to do to become better at something - to become something!

And sometimes, it takes a lot of time until you find something interesting that could change your entire dull life because your attention is somewhere else when that 'interesting thing' is closer to you than you've realized.

As you can see, the attention I've brought upon myself in order to become better has been of good value. Oi, oi, headstanding to sneak a peek at that charming whatever is better than nothing! Moreover, what has this had to do with the title? So should you ask without hesitation!

Aren't you a novelist? A novelist who writes with your own palm at the top of the sky? A dreamer, perhaps, whose future is unpredictable... where whether sinking or swimming can be chosen from your own action. However, always looking in the future can heavily affect you in your present situation... as it is, that present is furthermost, what creates history and becomes written in history.

Haven't you realized the point of what I have written?

I'll assume you do understand. In writing, there are different ideas and mistakes that are screaming to be implemented and fixed which you don't know as of yet. Furthermore, they are like the main quest that blocks you from moving forward, and unless you find that idea and those mistakes... will moving forward becomes an option. Until then, your novel is complete garbage, every comment you see is making you depressed, and all your friends don't want to be with you anymore (not like you had one, to begin with). Now you know, do you, the lack of attention I speak of!

It is also the same by being able to read the atmosphere and someone's emotion so that you can treat that atmosphere or that someone with utmost delicacy. That, right there, is not a lack of attention (insensitive) but abundant attention (sensitive without the in-LMFAO) given!

It is the lack of attention that you experience or have experienced or have yet to experience. Sometimes, it takes an observational talent to become aware of your own weakness and advantages. But in your opinion to yourself, brought by your own observational talent, I ask of you.

What is that lacking aspect that has been drawing your attention?

It may not be it, or it may be impossible to fix. However, understanding yourself fully is a step to moving forward. Have a look at yourself and understand what needs to be changed or what's screaming to make you better! Your answer here can determine the fate of your future - even ignoring this can make something bad or good happen!
 
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Let me cut down some uneeded wordiness...
Pay attention on details to improve. Whether its in your writings or something amiss in your life. If you miss it, nothing changes and it can leave you down in the chumps.

And pay attention to what others say so your responses actually make sense!

Never give up. Never surrender. Do not look at that tempting charming white flag. Do not wave it. Do Not.
Done paraphrasing an essay. Where's my grade now?
 
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Done paraphrasing an essay. Where's my grade now?
Here.

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Reason: You made me read a lot.
 

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Descartes... give me the strength to be able to read this wall of text without actually reading it - no, what the hell are you saying? Stop telling me to give her the dick! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....
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You've gotta keep on sucking
Keep on sucking
Keep on sucking if you wanna get nice and full
You've gotta keep on sucking
Keep on sucking
Mom's milk is really good
 

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Let me cut down some uneeded wordiness...

Pay attention to details. That is how you improve. It could be details from your writing that sews your story together or something that you feel is missing in your life (opportunities, different paths, etc.). If you don't pay attention, you can miss it, and this can either turn your life around or make you feel down in the drains.

What actions you choose determines your life. It may take awhile to find that detail, but when you do, things will click in place. Sometimes its better not to jump too far ahead but fix and improve on what you have in the present to actually improve on the future outcome.

Being observant lets you assess where you stand in terms of where you are and what you want to do so you can then improve on it. There are many ideas floating around. It can be daunting so many things to find which is best route (writing ,life, etc.) , but we all start somewhere. You have to look closely to see which is good and which is bad. That is how you make it.

Also, paid attention to details others have said so you can be more thoughtful in your responses.

Never give up. Never surrender. Do not look at that tempting charming white flag. Do not wave it. Do Not.

Done paraphrasing an essay. Where's my grade now?
10 out of the whole words because you cut some unneeded wordiness.
 
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