MorweMorningMorgen
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I'm having trouble developing a good blurb for my story. I am very close to finishing it, but I'm having trouble creating an eye-catching first sentence. The story is non-LitRPG, non-Isekai, and non-Wuxia.
The cover for this web novel is going to feature a lady thief who has a really big butt. The art style will be anime. She is going to be wearing a costume that she usually wears while committing robberies.
This story will center around the robberies committed by the aforementioned female MC & an ugly male MC. The romance will be slow-burn, and the blurb will mention this. It will be hundreds of thousands of words before the MCs have sex. However, the story will have, and I'm not joking, hundreds of (titillating) sex scenes after a certain point, so I think the story deserves the smut category. The story will likely have chapters in the thousands, with about more than 200 of those chapters having sex scenes. However, sex won't be the focus of the story, and the story will get super serious after a certain point, although sex scenes will still occur very frequently. There will be much more fight scenes than sex scenes.
The blurb's first sentence is going to mention her butt in some way.
I have three options (Note: Haven't decided on names yet):
"X is a curvy woman who lives a secret life as a thief."
"X is a curvaceous woman who lives a secret life as a thief."
"X is a female thief with an enormous butt."
Here's the pros and cons I thought for each first sentence:
Curvy: A word commonly used to indicate that someone has a big butt. However, it has become a synonym for someone who is overweight. My female MC is actually overweight, but not that overweight, and she's also overweight in the right places.
Curvaceous: Also an accurate word, but seems a little too complicated-looking. A lot of web novel readers don't know English as their first language, so that might scare them away.
Enormous butt: More spot-on, but may make the story seem too pornographic and light-hearted. May make readers think that the female MC's butt is going to be mentioned constantly throughout the story, and that the story will be centered around sex (although there will be A LOT of sex). In the actual story, the female MC's butt will be mentioned only once (although other attractive body parts will be mentioned often whenever she's around the male MC), and her butt will not be directly mentioned again until soon before sex scenes start happening. If I don't explicitly mention the female MC's butt in the blurb, the readers will still know she has a big one thanks to the cover and the adjectives "curvy/curvaceous". The more subtle mention will make readers know that sex will happen, but won't be the center of the story.
The cover for this web novel is going to feature a lady thief who has a really big butt. The art style will be anime. She is going to be wearing a costume that she usually wears while committing robberies.
This story will center around the robberies committed by the aforementioned female MC & an ugly male MC. The romance will be slow-burn, and the blurb will mention this. It will be hundreds of thousands of words before the MCs have sex. However, the story will have, and I'm not joking, hundreds of (titillating) sex scenes after a certain point, so I think the story deserves the smut category. The story will likely have chapters in the thousands, with about more than 200 of those chapters having sex scenes. However, sex won't be the focus of the story, and the story will get super serious after a certain point, although sex scenes will still occur very frequently. There will be much more fight scenes than sex scenes.
The blurb's first sentence is going to mention her butt in some way.
I have three options (Note: Haven't decided on names yet):
"X is a curvy woman who lives a secret life as a thief."
"X is a curvaceous woman who lives a secret life as a thief."
"X is a female thief with an enormous butt."
Here's the pros and cons I thought for each first sentence:
Curvy: A word commonly used to indicate that someone has a big butt. However, it has become a synonym for someone who is overweight. My female MC is actually overweight, but not that overweight, and she's also overweight in the right places.
Curvaceous: Also an accurate word, but seems a little too complicated-looking. A lot of web novel readers don't know English as their first language, so that might scare them away.
Enormous butt: More spot-on, but may make the story seem too pornographic and light-hearted. May make readers think that the female MC's butt is going to be mentioned constantly throughout the story, and that the story will be centered around sex (although there will be A LOT of sex). In the actual story, the female MC's butt will be mentioned only once (although other attractive body parts will be mentioned often whenever she's around the male MC), and her butt will not be directly mentioned again until soon before sex scenes start happening. If I don't explicitly mention the female MC's butt in the blurb, the readers will still know she has a big one thanks to the cover and the adjectives "curvy/curvaceous". The more subtle mention will make readers know that sex will happen, but won't be the center of the story.
