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Aim for the next rank! That's just the first step. Still, it's nice to see that there are quite a few people reading your works, so you can be proud of that.

What are you even saying? You claim you bought these, but they're not yet finished? Also, how can you "make him more visual"? Will you just randomly dump that art in your book? Tell us honestly, are you the artist yourself, or do you just promote your own works?? This sounds a little sketchy...

Most readers won't even bother with stories that do not have at least 50 chapters.

For what do you need them?

I think it sounds fine... but I'd need to read A LOT more details to give you detailed feedback. You would need to explain what a normal human would be capable of, how classes work, the differences, limitations, ways of training & growing stronger. Still, what you got is perfectly reasonable...

Many people skip prologues... most of them find them confusing. I don't think they are important. If you don't know what you're doing or don't have any real good reason for one, I would always suggest you skip them.

I don't think anyone will be so mean as to give a story that hasn't received a single Review, a bad one. That would be soul-crushingly mean. Usually, even if I dislike a story, I never rate it badly. In reality, even a 4/5 is dragging a story down, something most people don't even realize.

Actually, a nice resolution for 2026. I'll try to write a few Reviews as well, especially for smaller stories I enjoyed that don't have many reviews yet.

Just received another one. This is hilarious, how wrong it is. Probably AI is trying to summarize a chapter. "Hey! I was reading "Fantasy Realm Infinite Worlds Adventure" and just got to the part where Alex and the crew are planning their move against Baroque Works on the East Blue, that...

Can I be honest? The words are not responsible for reviews... readers are. You got 40. If you don't engage in "Review swaps," a practice as natural as breathing on RR and relatively common on SH as well, you usually don't get a review with such a low number of readers. Frankly speaking, my...

The silliest scammers are those posting on the last chapter of the story claiming, "I really enjoyed your story, but I have a few suggestions." Then I check their account, brand new. So they read 440 chapters in 1 day... along with 30 other stories... sure. ?

I have like barely over 2k readers on this platform, and maybe another 10-15k on other sites. I don't take my writing and myself too seriously. Talking about artistic integrity feels a little bit too much for me. I want to write interesting stories, battles, and include a lot of worldbuilding...

I think I can deal with that ;) At least wrap it up in nice wrapping paper and gift it to me for Christmas.

I am just joking here... everyone who is asking for feedback at this point should know that he or she is about to get roasted. Still, it would be hilarious if someone turned the tables on him.

I don't remember Dragon Ball permanently killing off protagonists (permanently at least)... most Anime don't. It's always supporting characters only. There are rarely any real MC deaths because Japanese Mangaka know the heavy reactions from their fans. Also, you can't compare Anime with web...

I haven't played Genealogy... that's why I mentioned it in response to your plan... *AAAAHEM Spoiler* Do whatever you want. I always think it's important that you write for yourself. However, I can tell you that if people love your story, you will lose readers... a lot of them. Better warn...

Do you have any readers left? That sounds like torture. It might be funny in theory, but if you really pull out something like that, you'll lose half your readers, and your reputation is ruined ;) If I'd go blind and a story pulls something like that out of its ass, I would rage. Even if the...

Well, it seems like you are "unworthy," but maybe someone with the required skills will step up and turn up the heat for a real dark brown roast.

I think people who request a review are either too lazy to check out his earlier reviews or are simply masochists. Maybe one day someone else will review Tempokai's own works and put him in his place :blob_evil: