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As a clown who has all of his stories in his reading list, I really don't think 1 reader makes a difference. Nobody here will hold you to the highest standards.

If you offend me, I'll eradicate your entire clan.

Maybe the internet made me into a true degenerate, but I'd suggest censoring LESS. Maybe make her wear a Bikini or something ;)

I agree... Tempokai is overworked because there are so many people that want their stories reviewed. Personally, I'm not interested in others reviewing my stories because I ask them to. The only feedback I care about is from readers who WANT to read my story. Begging someone else to read it...

I think Tempokai is retired. He fought bravely until he couldn't take it anymore. Let the man rest and enjoy his retirement.

Though I am personally not interested in BL, you gotta appreciate the effort put into this contest. If anyone is interested, they should really participate, not only can they share their stories, but they even get some real valuable feedback. Anyone who loves BL should be grateful and maybe...

Pretty good. Maybe the narration could use a tiny bit of improvement. Usually, the narrator can accurately describe things. Which is how you construct your story, almost the entire chapter, with a few exceptions. Using words like "suited guy" instead of "man wearing an expensive suit" or...

Since it's only editing and you actually completed them, in my opinion, you can't really abandon them. It's nice that you'll still refine/edit them, but I think you did your job as an author, and you should be proud of yourself. I really respect authors who finish their works and do not...

Congratulations. You achieved something great.

Charles, I think your standard is the standard of normal (classical) fantasy authors. This is a place for webnovels. Nobody, and I stress, nobody writes like that. I've read hundreds of stories, and I haven't seen this type of writing even once. So it might be acceptable in a formal sense in...

Yeah, most readers don't bother with the Author section ;) This reads a little like Main Character Syndrome.

Heh, you people are all amateurs... pathetic! I don't even have to ask myself that question because when I started writing, I was such a moronic ? that I self-inserted myself into the story. I didn't think I'd ever have a few people reading my story, so I didn't consider the repercussions.

Honestly, peak character design. Really awesome to look at. The art itself is also quite good-looking.

Tell us what you plan on revising. Why do you want to revise it? What are you struggling with? This just feels like a "Read my story" post without any real merit. Give us more details so we can answer your questions and maybe address your doubts.

Sorry, totally unreadable in my opinion. You need to study basic grammar, maybe download a tool like Grammarly. You comma's are consistently wrong, even in your messages here. You do not leave a blank and write: *WORD , WORD* You need to put your comma directly after the first word. You do not...

I don't see the risk. Generally, you want your first chapter to be a bit longer and, as you said, contain a hook to draw in the reader. 3.3k sounds like a perfect length to me; you are doing fine, chill. Do not create dopamine-filled, high-energy junk food because you might attract more readers...

Why do you create a Reader Poll in the Author section? I don't want to bitch, but there is a Reader section.

You can do anything, not like there are rules to follow. Though as a reader, I would get annoyed and confused, but if it's just for special chapters and has a clear reason, I'd accept it.

Just join one and find out. It will be something like this, probably: They mostly try to convince you that you are missing out on so much because you lack an original cover and custom art. Those things would make your story so much more popular, and it's disappointing that you haven't done it...

"Her" 99.9% a guy, trying to scam you. These fake artists are mostly female because they try to scam mostly men. Never trust a single thing they say it's all lies.