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I think outside of a grammar checker, or having a friend look at it, the best free recourse for editing is a screen reader. That way you can hear your story and catch awkward phrasing and the like. Of course you can read it aloud yourself, but for longer works, that is more work than necessary imo.
AI ‘enhanced’ writing is such a slog to get through. It treats every moment as a 11 yet its descriptions and prose are quite average. Every moment is the most important moment a sentence becomes twice as long, or multiple sentences. With frivolous ornamentation that make its writing seem purple if not for how bland its prose is.
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
I was thinking more along the line you thought that this was a romance story, but psych there are wizards and shit. But yes, the whole there was no stakes in the first place twists were quite common too. I mean look at the cheat stories of today, or the reincarnated back in time/into a story I know like the back of my hand of the era.
Erysion
Erysion
Some of those ornamentation are authors using show don't tell. Or an unsuccesful attempt of one. The sentences become longer because of that. Try not to mistake those for AI 'enhanced' but I'm sure you already know the difference.
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
The difference is easy to tell after a page. Human purple prose reads different to AI enhancement. For one they tend to focus on different things, humans are willing to break grammar rules for added flair, and the word choice for human purple prose tends to be less boring.
Arigato, senpai, for being a logical cute girlie :blob_reach:. Ik that was random but I just wanted to say thanks-nya :meowsip:
q log #177: you wake up, to see a slime looming over you. "Taxes? Transphobia? Humans? What are you talking about? Its a lovely day for us monsters to frolic among the animals and plants on this otherwise uninhabited planet, come, join us, we were about to start the dance competition!"


And so, MY THREAD ABOUT SCAMMERS HAS PROVEN ITS USE FOR MULTIPLE TIMES NOW, fucking dimwits!

I've been exonerated and justified.
I have gotten 15 members on Patreon, of which 12 are paid. I genuinely think that anyone can do it, and I will continue working to prove it true. Admittedly, you do need some delusions of grandeur and an intuition for popularity. Well, maybe need is a strong word, and also I did work hard.
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What the hell. Why is this so accurate??
Foolishness, Dante.

Having electrical currents in all the cells of your body is what makes it possible for you to move around, have thoughts, and experience emotions.

Without electricity, you would have no bodily control or even the awareness of what is going on around you.
Hey beautiful,
I saw you walking, and I just had to stop by to see for myself, and wow, perfection really does exist. 💋💕
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