ConansWitchBaby
Da Scalie Whisperer
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I will gladly admit that I am still a noob at this. But I just came up with a premise that outright seems impossible for me at the current time. Hell, even in a while from now. Do you guys just file it away as a maybe I'll eventually get to it type of deal?
For me specifically, the idea requires shifting the view of reality in the story to show a damaged mind. The premise I came up with is an unofficial trial being done on a crazed eighty-year-old hermit claiming to have been with the heroes that managed to save the world. It involves using mind/memory magic to see his claims. The bulk of the story showing a journey starting from refusing to leave the country and go back and fight to when the big bad was defeated. Thing is that to make the specific ending that I thought of it requires a division of three simultaneous "timelines" overlayed on one another. Which is just his mind not being able to differentiate between events anymore. The first when the MC was with his friends going back since everyone is escaping the world ending. Second is when they all died and the guy is going through the steps. Third, when it is revealed that he kept repeating everything they did seeing his friends the entire time. Going through the motions and thinking his friends were training him. Ultimately revealed that he was the one that defeated the big bad by himself in the end. Panning to the present where he is setting up a dinner because they visit him each day.
The "trial" is one of potential official heroes (part of the original group of friends) that left with the refugees is seeking information on what happened to her friends. The MC isn't trusted by most because he wasn't the only one that was "left behind" so him being there and traumatized isn't proof enough.
For me specifically, the idea requires shifting the view of reality in the story to show a damaged mind. The premise I came up with is an unofficial trial being done on a crazed eighty-year-old hermit claiming to have been with the heroes that managed to save the world. It involves using mind/memory magic to see his claims. The bulk of the story showing a journey starting from refusing to leave the country and go back and fight to when the big bad was defeated. Thing is that to make the specific ending that I thought of it requires a division of three simultaneous "timelines" overlayed on one another. Which is just his mind not being able to differentiate between events anymore. The first when the MC was with his friends going back since everyone is escaping the world ending. Second is when they all died and the guy is going through the steps. Third, when it is revealed that he kept repeating everything they did seeing his friends the entire time. Going through the motions and thinking his friends were training him. Ultimately revealed that he was the one that defeated the big bad by himself in the end. Panning to the present where he is setting up a dinner because they visit him each day.
The "trial" is one of potential official heroes (part of the original group of friends) that left with the refugees is seeking information on what happened to her friends. The MC isn't trusted by most because he wasn't the only one that was "left behind" so him being there and traumatized isn't proof enough.