Yeah, I've finished practicing writing a narrative novel. Yep.

[hell_yeahMylike]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1975768/this-is-fantasy/
I already tried writing a narrative novel as suggested. Even though I’m still not very good at describing scenes and situations, I’m doing my best. I read a lot of the recommended novels, and of course, I wrote my own, which made my hand hurt a lot! But I don't want to rely on AI at all.
However, about the cover image I'm not very good at drawing it, and it lacks shadow details.
I apologize in advance for that.

 

[MFontana]

As one of the folks who offered you some narrative-writing advice, I'll check it out later and leave some comments when I have.
I can also DM you a full critique as well, if you like. Just let me know if you want one.

 

[YummyNovels]

Try reading a third person perspective novel, for example a chinese novel. Their narrative seems to draw you in; you can clearly see what they are describing, and their storytelling is impressive, though it’s hard to put into words.