Spoopytagedie
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A few years back i wrote here but had to stop for certain reasons. I regretted it so Im doing it again. So far its well recieved but im not really all that satisfied and want to see where I can improve. If anyone is willing could they please take a look and tell me what could use work.
Id also appriciate it if anyone read the original and told me how the reboot compares so far. Heres the links for both. Ive already abandoned the original so any writing advice would be purely for the reboot.
Thank you in advance. Ill take advice in any form.
Heres the original.
www.scribblehub.com
And heres the reboot.
www.scribblehub.com
Id also appriciate it if anyone read the original and told me how the reboot compares so far. Heres the links for both. Ive already abandoned the original so any writing advice would be purely for the reboot.
Thank you in advance. Ill take advice in any form.
Heres the original.
Reincarnated As A Wood Golem
For a year I would always dream of visiting another world. Living as the marionette of a little slum boy, growing with him. With that one year that boy became an adult and turned that marionette into a life sized doll, built his own kingdom, and died. On the day...
And heres the reboot.
Reincarnated As A Wood Golem(Reboot)
Shortly after my son died I started dreaming of another world. I took over a wooden doll and met him, a boy who looked just like my earth son. I could never hear his name despite the nights we spent together. Though, those nights started to grow farther and farther...