Writing Write my first novel. Asking for feedback.

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I just started to write my novel.


Genre: Historical Fantasy, Wuxia, Kingdom Building, Politics, System, Cultivation

World Setting: China 184 AD, referencing Romance of the Three Kingdoms with fictional characters.

It still on 3 chapters, I want to ask for feedback:
  • currently the word count per chapter is around 700-900 words, is this consider too short or standard word counts?
  • is the current story pacing ok/too fast/ too slow?
  • was planning to add more details about the world setting, such as politics, war, or social situation about the world. Should I introduced it slowly based on the story going or should I make 1 chapter specifically to details it? or just put it into glossary for just for people who are interested on it?
currently brainstorming for my 4th chapter.
 
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