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FlutterOfCrows

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"When someone treats you like a person, when you don't even feel like a human, it will change your entire world."

Write a character in a few paragraphs or a scene that experiences this.
 

Bartun

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I was just writing something like this for my final chapter
  She’s been through a lot since all this began, and deep down she was glad this was all she had to worry about now. She’s been treated like an object, a prize, a trophy, something to be traded off and fought over but no one other than Verkan and Kuro listened or even cared about her.

  Then, out of nowhere, him. Rudo cared, he listened, he respected and protected her, and in the biggest twist of them all, he captured her own heart. Not like that! Definitely not like that. But he had pulled her out of the hole she’d been in and carried on through impossible odds with nothing but that childish, unyielding resolve that she had come to admire.

  It was odd. The first person who treated her like an actual human being was, ironically, not even human. He wasn’t exactly the easiest to be around, but he had turned into someone she could completely trust and rely on. And while everyone treated her with the sobriety that came with her position, Rudo, with all his quirks and antics, was the first one that treated her and made her feel just like…

  Dare she say it?


  
A girl.
 
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RecursiveDescent

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I didn't expect to see a quote that would be relevant to my plans. I have a character that's going to be fitting this almost perfectly but its very far away... The most annoying part of writing is not being able to start on the best parts you have in mind until you actually write enough to get there
 

ArcadiaBlade

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I was actually designing this character thats basically Otto from HI3 when I saw this quote.

The story is basically a Group Chat fanfic and my character is some Mad scientist who seeks revenge on his parents death and before even experiencing his story, the group chat reveals that he would fall in love with his parents killer's daugher who is a superhero(Villain/hero setting) and after the girl died, he basically goes full Otto just to revive her and would kill himself to raise her into becoming the saint of the world(because of the setting of the world).

"When the world cries for a hero, a hymn for a Villain's laughter as he raises his own coffin.

When you gave a sad man a hope in life, he gave you a world to fly as he lays on his deathbed."
 

Nolff

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"When someone treats you like a person, when you don't even feel like a human, it will change your entire world."

Write a character in a few paragraphs or a scene that experiences this.
The bearded man, Yoan.



He sat there, on the desk of his office.

He writes, he wrote, he spoke, he quote, and he prosed. Research, ideas, theories, all to find who made him. It's all to search for an answer to a question he'd memorized for so long.


"Why do we exist?"


As mysterious as death is, being alive is a mesmerizing fairy tale.

How could a human be a human? How could its anatomy be shaped that way? What makes one a biological human?
And where do we come from? Are we from space? Are we aliens?


Lots of questions, but many were left unanswered.

So, he wanders. Throughout land, sea, and air, he collected many books and gathered so much knowledge.
So much to the point, everyone in the world calls him "Wise".

He admits he hates the title because he's an idealist.

One: Being entitled "Wise" could harm his motives.
Two: He does not like to be called that.
And lastly: He's a humble, respectful man.


Down to Earth, Clever, Wiseful, he'd been called to go to seminars, intellectual gatherings, book events, debates, and more.
He accepted several and rejected the rest. "I got no time." He said.


After 40 years of looking for the answer, he decided to build a cabin above a waterfall with her beloved wife.

A cozy, warm, wooden cabin. It was built all by him and his companion. No outsider's help, just them both and mother nature.


Amidst the calming environment, he rethink all the experiences he had throughout his journey to find the answer.


Then, his brain sparks. He realizes...



"An entity exists, and I believe in it."

"..."

"..."


"It lets me live, it lets me breath, it gave me a way to be human."

"..."

"Then, why would it not prevent problems?"



His walk might end, but his tinkering with faith will never have an end.
 
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