Would you review pink daddy works?

[ZesshiLavi]

Hello my fellow pink citizen! I have recently finished a prologue and the first chapter of my first ever novel on this site!
I would be absolutely delighted if any of you sweet pink brilliant mind to read it and give a piece of your opinion and review.

Much love from Pink Daddy <3
Series Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/200235/mania-playground/

 

[JayDirex]

"Mai! Mai! God dammit the cops are getting close! Why you gonna get hit by a truck! I swear either get up now or *%#$@--"


"Where am I? The last thing I remember was getting hit by a truck and the next thing is I wake up in this weird place with flying books."


Zesshi, your story is cute, and you we need to know more about the bad-twin-tail girl who blew up the golem.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Most readers here are silent, so for feedback, I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe. They both have point systems that encourage users to leave reviews. However, it seems like WritersCafe has had some bugs since yesterday. Might want to wait a week before trying out WritersCafe.

 

[ZesshiLavi]

Glad you enjoy it Jay!
I will keep that in mind K5!