Would Love Your Feedback on The Fallen Gods

[Quintessa]

Hi everyone!


I’ve been working on my fantasy novel, The Fallen Gods, and I’d love to hear what you think! If you've read it—or even just started—your reviews and feedback would mean a lot.


They help me grow as a writer and give new readers a reason to check it out. Whether it's a quick impression or a detailed breakdown, I’m grateful for anything you'd like to share!


? The Fallen Gods


Thanks so much in advance—and happy reading! ?


— Quintessa

 

[FieryLou]

I don't have time right now to read 30 chapters, but let me start with the synopsis. To be honest, it can barely be viewed as such. It's pretty much just an info dump. We know a little bit about the world's backstory, but that's it. Who is the main character? Why are they the main character? What kind of setting is it?

I would rework this first.

 

[Quintessa]

I don't have time right now to read 30 chapters, but let me start with the synopsis. To be honest, it can barely be viewed as such. It's pretty much just an info dump. We know a little bit about the world's backstory, but that's it. Who is the main character? Why are they the main character? What kind of setting is it?

I would rework this first.

Thank you, I'll work on it.