oc_wanderer
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Hi all! I'd love to get some feedback on my story so far.
I am posting daily now, and even though I have some readers, I haven't heard anything yet.
It's a lite-LitRPG story, focused on our characters whose adolescence was interrupted when the 'system' arrived.
It's been four years since and this is the moment where they go off into the sunset and take us with them.
It's Sci-Fi, LitRPG, Drama?, Coming-of-Age, not harem, but lots of lovin' between our tight-knit crew.
I've got a lot of chapters in the backlog and a long outline, so I really hope the story doesn't suck so far.
If anyone would like to jump in, that'd be cool.
Here's my story.
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I am posting daily now, and even though I have some readers, I haven't heard anything yet.
It's a lite-LitRPG story, focused on our characters whose adolescence was interrupted when the 'system' arrived.
It's been four years since and this is the moment where they go off into the sunset and take us with them.
It's Sci-Fi, LitRPG, Drama?, Coming-of-Age, not harem, but lots of lovin' between our tight-knit crew.
I've got a lot of chapters in the backlog and a long outline, so I really hope the story doesn't suck so far.
If anyone would like to jump in, that'd be cool.
Here's my story.
Destiny Among the Stars, a Lite LitRPG Story
Four years ago, the System arrived, reshaping Earth and everything humanity thought it knew about survival, progress, and technology. Passive skills, innate abilities granted by the System, have transformed society, allowing humanity to rebuild and thrive. But with a hard level 60 cap and only...
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