MadFireGod
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I'm new to writing (about 2 month in) and I decided to write a LitRPG, however I've come to realize—a little late—that I've only read like one LitRPG novel kinda, and I'm not sure if just having a game element counts ?. So I'd really appreciate some criticism and general advice.
Edit: Figured people might want to see my synopsis first before deciding to give it a read.
In a realm where cultivation, and the seeking of mystic powers is the one and only force driving the humans on an unending path to achieving immortality, the Supreme God Emperor has achieved the impossible—he has reached the absolute peak of cultivation, transcending all known realms and possessing the power to bend reality to his will. Yet, even as the most powerful being in existence, he is left unfulfilled, with the heavens themselves taunting him with secrets they refuse to reveal. Seeking meaning beyond his godly powers, he tears through the fabric of space and time, only to find emptiness in the vast expanse beyond.
In his search for something more, the Supreme God Emperor stumbles upon Earth, a small, seemingly insignificant planet. Intrigued by its inhabitants and their peculiar obsession with video games and stories, he delves into their world, consuming every game and novel in existence. But even this newfound passion wanes, leaving him once again in the grip of monotony.
Then, an audacious idea takes root in his mind: What if he could transform his own world into a game? A world where cultivation is no longer bound by the rigid laws of nature, but governed by the dynamic rules of a game—complete with levels, skills, experience points, and quests. The Supreme God Emperor reshapes his realm into a living, breathing game, summoning the souls of the departed to serve as System Helpers, guiding mortals through this new reality.
As the game begins, every living being—from the humble farmer to the mightiest cultivator—finds themselves immersed in a world where power is no longer measured by traditional means, but by their ability to adapt, strategize, and conquer the challenges laid before them. But as they strive to level up and unlock their potential, they remain unaware of the mastermind behind it all—the Supreme God Emperor.
Although the question still remains unanswered: Will this new game satisfy his insatiable desire for challenge and meaning, or will it too fall into the abyss of boredom?
Thank you in advance! ?
Edit: Figured people might want to see my synopsis first before deciding to give it a read.
In a realm where cultivation, and the seeking of mystic powers is the one and only force driving the humans on an unending path to achieving immortality, the Supreme God Emperor has achieved the impossible—he has reached the absolute peak of cultivation, transcending all known realms and possessing the power to bend reality to his will. Yet, even as the most powerful being in existence, he is left unfulfilled, with the heavens themselves taunting him with secrets they refuse to reveal. Seeking meaning beyond his godly powers, he tears through the fabric of space and time, only to find emptiness in the vast expanse beyond.
In his search for something more, the Supreme God Emperor stumbles upon Earth, a small, seemingly insignificant planet. Intrigued by its inhabitants and their peculiar obsession with video games and stories, he delves into their world, consuming every game and novel in existence. But even this newfound passion wanes, leaving him once again in the grip of monotony.
Then, an audacious idea takes root in his mind: What if he could transform his own world into a game? A world where cultivation is no longer bound by the rigid laws of nature, but governed by the dynamic rules of a game—complete with levels, skills, experience points, and quests. The Supreme God Emperor reshapes his realm into a living, breathing game, summoning the souls of the departed to serve as System Helpers, guiding mortals through this new reality.
As the game begins, every living being—from the humble farmer to the mightiest cultivator—finds themselves immersed in a world where power is no longer measured by traditional means, but by their ability to adapt, strategize, and conquer the challenges laid before them. But as they strive to level up and unlock their potential, they remain unaware of the mastermind behind it all—the Supreme God Emperor.
Although the question still remains unanswered: Will this new game satisfy his insatiable desire for challenge and meaning, or will it too fall into the abyss of boredom?
Thank you in advance! ?
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