Would love feedback for my short story

[DominaterRaider]

it is a slice of life in a fantasy world.

The Elder Lich That Wanted Peace and Quiet

Can't a Skeleton lord live in peace? In a world of dungeons and dragons, there is a skeleton on a mountain in his mansion who wants sleep. Who wants to travel the world anyway, it is much better to stay inside and get a well-deserved rest.

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[RepresentingWrath]

Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

Just that. Post if you're interested. I'm bored and unwilling to do anything else. Notice! Due to me having irl stuff coming up, I won't be able work on any new requests in the foreseeable future. I'll continue until the end of the week, but anyone who hasn't received feedback by then likely...

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