What was the most embarrasing thing you've ever written.

[PeacefulMyst]

For me it was this stupid thing i submitted for our school magazine.
I think it was some kind of spider man parody?
I remember the plot ending with the mc defeating the villain with music so good the villain couldn't stop dancing.


I still contemplate to this day which demon had possessed me when went over what i had written and thought "yep this is amazing."

 

[Deleted member 54065]

That hentai original I burned to ashes after I realized I cringe at smut genre.

 

[PeacefulMyst]

That hentai original I burned to ashes after I realized I cringe at smut genre.

A hentai original? that's pure talent. what was the plot like?

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Everything I write is embarrassing cringe, even this reply.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Basically, it's just a vanilla romance of my grown-up characters from a HS manga I wrote when I was in, well, high school.

Typical shy boy, popular girl trope. And they ended up doing it, but not before marrying each other.

Edit: also, add the anime-style high school drawings...and you get an ultimate cringe of a work.

 

[Ai-chan]

A short 10k words story about high school battles where the protagonist won through dicking every other fighter, both men and women.

 

[SakeVision]

That 100+ page long yaoi fiction I never showed to anyone

 

[BlackKnightX]

For me it was this stupid thing i submitted for our school magazine.
I think it was some kind of spider man parody?
I remember the plot ending with the mc defeating the villain with music so good the villain couldn't stop dancing.


I still contemplate to this day which demon had possessed me when went over what i had written and thought "yep this is amazing."

Not sure, but maybe the second title in my signature?

 

[Deleted member 54065]

@PeacefulMyst

Here's a sample page of that manga...though of course, it's SFW...
Now here's the thing. I burned the physical original of it, but I found some scanned copies when I reorganized my back-up CDs. Decided to keep it for the funsies, like this topic.

 

[Puji-Maki]

All of them, everything, even my whole life. No, seriously. I'm cool with people from internet reading my works but I'll kill myself(jk) if one of my irl friends/family read them. I mean, I'm a good person(I think) and my friends will definitely be shocked if they found that one of my Mc's done something terrible towards a woman. That's the most humiliating and embarrassing in my opinion.

 

[CarburetorThompson]

An essay about race relations.

 

[NobleTalon]

For me it was this stupid thing i submitted for our school magazine.
I think it was some kind of spider man parody?
I remember the plot ending with the mc defeating the villain with music so good the villain couldn't stop dancing.


I still contemplate to this day which demon had possessed me when went over what i had written and thought "yep this is amazing."

it was not a story but a sms

I was drunk and going out of the club at 5 am, the taxi was already waiting but my friend was still inside. I clicked on the wrong number and I sent "get your ass out of here mtf" to my former patron instead of my friend

The next Monday I had to explain everything, and I almost got fired cuz of that lmao

 

[MyukiMruieast]

The story I wrote at grade 5 (6?). It was about a boy with a chronic heart disease and a nurse's son. They became friends, kissed when 15, separated, meet again but ml is dating a girl then two became lovers again then made up and mc got heart attack. Got his heart changed, then gave birth. Son then marries a girl and had a daughter, daughter meets an Angel and falls in love, made up, and had twins.

All that, before I knew the term mpreg and logic.

 

[Squirrel]

The words I write in my very first draft..

 

[Scaver]

For me it was this stupid thing i submitted for our school magazine.
I think it was some kind of spider man parody?
I remember the plot ending with the mc defeating the villain with music so good the villain couldn't stop dancing.


I still contemplate to this day which demon had possessed me when went over what i had written and thought "yep this is amazing."

That was Lilith if you ask me

 

[Agentt]

A short 10k words story about high school battles where the protagonist won through dicking every other fighter, both men and women.

You still have it?

 

[PeacefulMyst]

@PeacefulMyst

Here's a sample page of that manga...though of course, it's SFW...
Now here's the thing. I burned the physical original of it, but I found some scanned copies when I reorganized my back-up CDs. Decided to keep it for the funsies, like this topic.

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now that's some truly great art. Better than anything i can ever draw. and as for the plot... well by the looks of things and from what you said. Mustve been great.
in fact id love to see the rest of it

 

[Deleted member 54065]

now that's some truly great art. Better than anything i can ever draw. and as for the plot... well by the looks of things and from what you said. Mustve been great.

Thanks!

By the way, I'm a sucker for romance and romantic comedies, even now. As for seeing the rest of it...even I am cringing whenever I go back to check on that file folder.

 

[Anon_Y_Mousse]

So when I was five, I had a notebook where I drew "future inventions" along with some cheesy descriptions. I don't have it now but iirc I wrote an unnecessarily detailed description about a titanium umbrella, and a tray that can cook eggs on the go without them falling off(yes, only eggs).

 

[InceTagn]

It was a manga with the main protagonist being my mathematics teacher, Big Zozo. He caught as I was drawing during the lesson. I got punished and I got him killed during the next chapter.