I am having trouble with what to put in the description for my series "Shouting the battle cry of Freedom In this other world"
Shouting the battle cry of freedom in this other world. | Scribble Hub. I initially wrote it with the intention of just being there as I was not really taking this seriously as a hobby. but now it is painfully obious that my original description
"What happens when history buff and reenactment enthusiast is tossed into another world in full uniform?
“And why am I a girl?”"
is woefully inadequate. What parts of a story are important for a synopsis?
Maybe a good way to make a synopsis is to think about your story's summary. You got a plot going by now surely so instead of revealing the point of everything right away from the very start, approach by vague sentences/phrases, sometimes if it fits a question, go with that as well.
(Just an example below, start)
When we finally experienced it from the beginning, the world turned dark, grim and even bloody. Hopeless and despair came forth out of the shadows and assured humanity was finally coming to its end. But years later, something changed, soon small groups changed to massive communities in a matter of months. This was our supposed last age, it was said to be the true end of our time and yet... Here is humankind returning to the light out of the darkness we dwelled once upon.
The questions still remained, how did we come back? Why now and what for? Can we really save our world once more?
(End example)
[Now I could've done it better but unfortunately, I'm also in a rush atm so just take it as you will]
Also if you ever thought to add the name of your character in the synopsis as well, that's your call really but always try to think of how you want to hook/bait in your reader to actually take interest in your story.
