First Impressions:
It looks like a generic fantasy "chosen one" story. The title tells me nothing, the synopsis is lengthy but mostly empty prose, and it introduces me to multiple side characters I haven't met yet. The tone sounds AI generated, except the pacing is wonky, so I know that it was written by a human. I suggest you at least fix up the pacing, else your story is going to lose readers before chapter one.
Also, what is up with the genre tags? The story looks like a hero saga, the genres look like I'm about to head into a dark school fantasy romance fic. But the tags, again, look like I'm about to read a saga. So what is this? If you don't make it clear to your readers what to expect from your story, readers will avoid it, or come in with the wrong expectations and be disappointed.
Thoughts on the Story:
You should delete the first sentence, of your first chapter, 'Start writing here...', because that was obviously a mistake.
Now for the more important problems. Mainly, you need to work on your story flow. You have this intense, solemn atmosphere going on with fancy metaphors, but you race past some events happening like a racehorse on a racetrack. Child is born, mom dies, child is handed off, king goes to battle, all in a single chapter, and you place equal importance on all said events. So you end up with this weird pacing; you alternate between paragraphs made up of only quick short sentences and paragraphs with long flowery ones, and you keep building up atmosphere just to destroy it over and over again.
I suspect this is because you really like some of the sentences you've used to build atmosphere, the ones with lots of metaphors, and you can't bear to delete them, even though you want the first chapter to move on quickly. Either that, or you're trying to keep it detailed and heavy, but you don't know how, so you're writing with a wonky pacing. If it's the former, violently delete all of your longer sentences and focus on telling the exposition quickly. If it's the latter, make the pacing slower and show us the scenes instead of telling them.
The more we get into the story, the worse this gets. The story's pacing goes wild like a rocket, and it's horrible because this is where we finally meet the protagonist. But I have zero attachment, it feels like I'm reading a summary instead of actual writing, and you don't have any subtle details that pull me into the scene.
Oh, and in chapter three, you also have this lump of a paragraph where you didn't space anything, so you might wanna do something about that.
In conclusion, your story has lovely prose, and has potential. It just reads completely unedited. You should read your story over and edit everything before you present it to other people; otherwise you'll regret it in the future, lol. (I'm speaking from experience.)
Good luck.
