Updated story - Kaela - Looking for feedback

[JoshuaWaukee]

Hello everyone. I had my story posted here some time back, but took it down to work on it a bit. Now I am reposting the story on Scribble Hub. Feel free to give me feedback. Here are the first 4 chapters to review as an example.

Story name : Kaela

Ch 1: Let's Go To The Cave Filled With Monsters

Kaela - Ch 1: Let’s Go To The Cave Filled With Monsters | Scribble Hub

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Ch 2: It's Way More Than We Imagined

Kaela - Ch 2: It’s Way More Than We Imagined | Scribble Hub

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Ch 3: The Stuff Of Legends

Kaela - Ch 3: The Stuff Of Legends | Scribble Hub

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Ch 4: Sister, Lets Ride Monsters High In The Air

Kaela - Ch 4: Sister, Lets Ride Monsters High In The Air | Scribble Hub

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