Thoughts on this map? (And the world if you're curious)

Staag

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Yes, everything is meant to be ridiculous. So, if the name is corny then it is.

I'm planning on putting 8 billion people via Isekai, done by a giant planet called 'Tru-CK' smashing against Earth. 8 billion people will be transported to this giant supercontinent.

There will be no animals, no bugs, no life besides plant life. Not yet, there will be certain people with S-Rank Husbandry Skills capable of 'spawning' animals.

Yes, this place is a literal 'Sandbox' for these people.

Imagine, suddenly getting dumped into a new world. Where everyone has these skills, some with the ability to defy the natural laws.

Oh, and if it wasn't enough. Zombies exist, and are gonna be the one and only extra race of this world, think of them more as a separate superhuman race, with the downside of having no ability to reproduce.

This concept was inspired by 1000 Player Minecraft Civilization Videos, especially the supercontinent-style map.
 

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My honest critique.

I don't know what you are asking for, but if this is supposed to be ridiculous in the first place, then it's fine I guess. And it does the basics of what you need.

I don't see how this will help the reader in the long run when cities, animals, and other strategic landmarks haven't been created yet in your story. The characters will determine how the world works, right? So, the only point to this map would be to know how far away someone is to another.

If this world is supposed to have unnatural climates that don't change, what is the importance of having them?

Are these different sections of the world going to drive the story somehow, or will it be something that is in the background and never really addressed?

Anyway, that's my ramblings, best of luck.
 
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The narrative function of maps is to explain the specific locations where the characters are and show the possibility of world exploration in future arcs while mapping out potential geopolitical conflicts in the future. I agree with @Paul__Michaels :

"Are these different sections of the world going to drive the story somehow, or will it be something that is in the background and never really addressed?"

If the narrative function of the map is not present from the start or never discussed in the story's narrative, then inserting a map becomes useless.

eldora map.jpg


The Map of the Eldora Continent

The Eldora continent consists of 6 regions, each occupied by kingdoms except Land Lost:
  1. In the east of the continent, there is the Rose Kingdom which is famous for its culture, architecture, art and nobility. The kingdom is currently ruled by a council of nobles, with the royal family of El Rose as the symbol of the kingdom. In this kingdom lived Blood Rose and her daughter.
  2. In the middle of the continent, there is the magic kingdom, Magica which has the most prestigious academy, Oxfoed in the world. This kingdom is ruled by a council of elite wizards. The kingdom maintained neutrality for centuries thanks to the existence of the Oxfoed academy where genius students from all countries on the continent gathered and studied magic.
  3. In the south of the continent, there is the Wealth Kingdom, which has the greatest wealth on the continent. This kingdom was led by a rich elite who controlled the kingdom's economy and could even control the continent's economy.
  4. In the north of the continent, there is the military kingdom, the Soldera Kingdom, which has the strongest military power on the continent. The kingdom is ruled by a military junta government.
  5. In the west of the continent, there is a group of autonomous countries that form the Freedom Alliance. The majority of these autonomous countries are republics. The Freedom Alliance was formed to face the Soldera Kingdom, which is ready to invade at any time.
  6. In the southeast of the continent, there is a no-man's land, Lost Land where is a stretch of desert, fog and rocky land. It is said that this land hides the ruins of an ancient civilisation. The Rose, Magica and Wealth Kingdoms are directly in contact with the Lost Land.
Along the coastline of the continent, there is a black area that is barren, foggy and filled with dangerous monsters. It is said that these monsters came from outside the continent and occupied the coastline, but for some reason, they did not invade the mainland of the continent.

Beyond the coastline lies the Endless Sea, which is said to be extremely dangerous and filled with sea monsters. Little is known about the Endless Sea because not many explorers have made it out alive.

Have I ever described this map as setting/worldbuilding?
Yes, it's narratively reflected in the story's setting in each chapter. Even in the prequel, I mapped out the strategic positions between kingdoms and potential future geopolitical conflicts:



Vol 1 Chapter 5: Epilogue – Blood Rose Shakes the Continent of Eldora
Blood Rose: Her Last Mercy was Death by Eldoria

Four Continental Empires Watch

In addition to the Rose Kingdom, there are four great powers that have been maintaining the fragile balance of the Eldora Continent.
They received a message from the Rose Kingdom:
A trembling letter with the royal seal.
It contained an emergency announcement and a wanted poster:

WANTED
wanted

BLOOD ROSE​

The perpetrator of the assassination of Duke Gilles de Vire.
The instigator of extrajudicial judgment.
The extremist who threatens the stability of all kingdoms.
Threat Level: IV - Blightbrand
Bounty: 10.000 gold coins
Died or Alive
The letter was airborne along with dozens of black eagles.
And in every capital city of the great empires, the poster was displayed.
But what happened was not a manhunt. Nor was it a declaration of war.
What happened was…
Silence.



Reaction of the Wealth Kingdom

Sitting on a throne surrounded by gold and graphite engravings of wealth,
Queen Mevalina II frowned as she read the news.

“Duke Gilles is dead? Huh. He owes us a huge debt.”

“And the murderer? She expose the crime? Then who do we blame? The perpetrator, or the revealer?”

The queen sipped her wine with jewelled fingers and chuckled.

“Let’s watch. Let the Rose dance a while longer before we pluck its petals.”



Reaction of the Magica Kingdom

In the Crystalline Glass Tower, the Archmages sat around a blood-colored orb of prophecy.

“Blood Rose… the power to penetrate the palace guards’ magic?

This is no ordinary magic. This is a will bathed in suffering.”

A young magus murmured softly:

“If magic is built from the deepest emotions… she is not just a wizard. She… is suffering itself.”

Magica chose to remain silent. They took notes. Observed.



Reaction of the Soldera Kingdom

The most brutal military empire viewed this case with high alert.

“If such an executioner were to attack our city, who would survive?”

Soldera’s generals began to re-map their cities’ strategies.
They were not interested in who was right or wrong.
They only wanted to know: How to kill the Executioner if she came to their gates?



Reaction of the Freedom Alliance

Among the democratic nations that made up the Freedom Alliance,
debates broke out like embers on dry paper.

“We cannot support extremists! Judgment without trial is the new tyranny!”

“But what if the courts have been bought by the old tyranny?”

Activists secretly distributed Blood Rose leaflets,
describing her not as a killer,
but as a living martyr.

“Blood Rose is not a symbol of death…
But a warning.
That if you fail to hear the voices of the victims,
then the bloody rose will speak for them.”

That day… the whole world did not just read one name.
They shivered at it.
They called her in prayers and curses.
Blood Rose Princess.

She was no longer just a fugitive.
She had become an idea.
And ideas…cannot be killed.



The Disaster Princesses Watch

As Gilles de Vire’s body was still gnawing at the time on the thorny rose stake,
News of his execution had spread like a poisonous fog to every corner of the Eldora Continent.

It was not just the common people who trembled, it was not just the nobles who shivered—
but those who stood outside the law,
those who were called the Disaster Princesses,
those who understood that this world had long since died…
those who knew that blood was but the last language of mankind.



POV: The Third Disaster Princess - Golden Wisdom

Below the underground library of the kingdom of Magica, where forbidden books made sounds when opened and candlelight hung in the air like curious spirits, a girl with short golden hair sat silently amidst the stacks of breathing books.

Her violet eyes held no emotion.

Only calculation.
Only a cold calculation of the crumbling moral fabric.

In her hands: a scroll of reports from the Rose kingdom, sealed in blood and ink.

“Blood Rose… An anomaly that destabilises the continent’s narrative. The public execution of the kingdom’s economic symbol… outside the law, outside the consensus. Is this the beginning… or the correction of the system?”

Golden Wisdom’s voice was almost an echo in the empty room.

Then she looked up at the stone ceiling carved with ancient magic symbols.

Marry El Rose… I wonder… what anomaly you will form from that wound, my sister.”

She didn’t smile. Didn’t cry.
Merely plotting possibilities.



POV: The Fourth Disaster Princess - Equality Princess

In the centre of the white marble hall of the Alliance’s People’s Council, among the senators debating morals and laws, sat a girl with fiery red hair, disguised as a promising young senator.

Her hand propped up on her chin, her smile was gentle yet dangling like a knife dancing over the flames. No one knew that behind her gentle smile, she was a living disaster: Equality Princess - Revia.

“Blood Rose has killed the hero of finance,” whispered one of the senators.

“But who made her a hero? Who counted her worth?”

Revia asked softly, slipping into the discussion like sweet poison. In her heart, she neither hated nor admired Blood Rose. She waited.

“Will she judge criminals of all classes… or only the tyrants above? Will that judgment be neutral, or still biased?”

Revia did not want the world cleansed by one bloody hand. She wanted the scales burned, then rebuilt.

“We will meet, sister. Amidst the flames of law and blood,” she whispered in his mind.



POV: The Eldest Disaster Princess - Earth Mother (Mother of the Disaster Princesses)

In a hidden place nestled in the heart of an ancient jungle. There grew a world tree whose trunk pierced the clouds, on one of its branches, sat a beautiful green-haired woman.

Her green eyes stared up at the sky sadly. She did not read the scrolls. She felt—through the weeping roots of the tree, through the flowers that screamed as the blood of children was spilt.

“Marry… so this is the path you chose.”

Earth Mother’s voice was fragile, but the trees bowed to hear her.

“I once guided you in your dreams, now you have awakened… and chosen to walk alone.”

She did not forbid. She did not regret.

“But… be careful, my little rose. Do not let your thorns prick you.”



POV: The Fifth Disaster Princess - Black Mist

In the ruins of a now. Silent city, where the bodies of men lie buried in silence and the bodies of women are shrouded in mist… a woman stands amidst an altar of mist. Black Mist — liberator of women and executioner of the patriarchal world—heard the news as she was erasing the traces of the city she had just:

“Liberated.”

A Shadowmist approached her.

“Your Highness, news has come. The Blood Rose has crucified a noble.”

Black Mist did not answer immediately.
She simply stood in the mist, listening to the sound of the wind and the silent screams in the air.

“The girls…are they tied up in the castle’s underground?”

“Yes, Princess. All of them.”

Black Mist laughed softly. But it was not a happy laugh.
That laughter… a laughter from the wound that finally found an echo elsewhere.

“My sister… You too smell the rotting bones and tears behind the palace.
Finally, someone dances in blood…
not out of hatred, but out of love that cannot be saved.”

She looked east.

“Postpone the next extermination. Send the women to Mist Garden.”

“And… make this city beautiful. Let them sleep… in clean dreams.”

Shadowmist bowed.

“What shall we do next, Princess?”

Black Mist smiled thinly, mist dancing around her.

“I wish to see Blood Rose’s face. Perhaps… she is the only one who can touch this wound.”



Meanwhile Marry...

POV: Unknown — A Shadow in Plain Sight


While the world was in turmoil,
while Gilles’ blood had yet to dry on the streets,
while kings argued in palaces of marble and lies—

—in a nameless corner of the world,
in a musty tavern filled with smoke and the stench of alcohol,
where the light was weaker than the liquor served,
A black-haired girl sat silently.

Her face was hidden by the shadow of a shabby robe’s hood.
Her eyes were dark, not reflecting the light of an oil lamp.

Before her:
a bowl of thin soup with almost no taste,
a piece of bread as hard as stone, held by time.

She ate slowly.
Without a sound.
Without involvement.
All around her, the world spoke.

“Blood Rose is a ruthless killer! If we lose Gilles, the country could fall!”

“The nobles are rotten. At least… someone dared to act.”

“Shhh! Be careful! The wanted posters are out! Who knows, there might be a spy here!”

“One… ten… thousand… gold coins, they said…”

“Crazy. If I can catch Blood Rose, I’ll retire!”

“Do you want to die? She’s not human…”

One table. Two tables. Five tables.
All repeating the same name:

Blood Rose. Blood Rose. Blood Rose.

But the girl sitting in the corner—
the girl they talked about,
they cursed, they made a myth and a curse—
simply sipped her soup.

She smiled faintly.
Not out of pride.
Not out of anger.
But because… the world had lost control of the narrative.

In her mind,
not anger, not arrogance,
but a city covered in rain.
Rain City.

“Rain City, I wonder what kind of play you are playing today…”

And no one knows,
that the girl who is silent in the corner of the tavern—
is the one they worship in prayers for justice,
the one they condemn as a terrorist,
the one they hunt with swords and money.

Marry El Rose.
Blood Rose Princess.


But for those who understand the meaning of wounds…
she is not a killer.
She is the law in the form of a rose.

Silent.
Soft.
But piercing.

When her steps leave the tavern,
No one looks.
No sound of warning.
No acknowledgement.

Only a silver coin was left on the table—
The only evidence that truth once sat with lies in the midst of a drunken world.

And like a shadow
She is gone.
 

Staag

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My honest critique.

I don't know what you are asking for, but if this is supposed to be ridiculous in the first place, then it's fine I guess. And it does the basics of what you need.

I don't see how this will help the reader in the long run when cities, animals, and other strategic landmarks haven't been created yet in your story. The characters will determine how the world works, right? So, the only point to this map would be to know how far away someone is to another.

If this world is supposed to have unnatural climates that don't change, what is the importance of having them?

Are these different sections of the world going to drive the story somehow, or will it be something that is in the background and never really addressed?

Anyway, that's my ramblings, best of luck.
It will definitely be a main component of the world building, mainly, for the Zombies.

Zombies can mutate into five types: Sight, Hearing, Touch, Smell and Taste.

Sight works best in Wellen, since Touch would struggle with the sand, Taste with the salty air, Hearing with the waves and Smell with the breeze. While none of these are outright drastic disadvantages, it is enough where a zombie aligning with Sight would be able to sense any other zombie faster than they would sense it.

Hearing works best in Kingshell, where things echo and reverberate. Sight would struggle with the constant mountainous terrain blocking their view, Touch having less range with sensing a ton of vertical surfaces but not horizontal, Smell struggles as scents doesn't carry well there and Taste couldn't track much due to sheer height of mountains not giving much in terms of horizontal sensing.

Touch works best in Plains, while Sight might work decently there, Touch has the most range, it can sense things even hidden in the grass or small hills. Hearing works decently but doesn't thrive in it compared to Kingshell, Smell also works well, but has the same reasoning to sight, Touch just has way more range in the Plains terrain. Taste can also work well here, but doesn't have the same range as Touch.

Smell works best in Phynell, because the dense jungle blocks Sight most of the time. Touch struggles from the trees constantly limiting their range, the verticality of them that is. Hearing might work well, but the sounds made by the vast amount of trees makes them a little less sharper as compared to the echo-ey Kingshell. Taste also struggles, with the environment being slightly overwhelming to their taste buds.

Taste works best in Zekka, where Sight is blocked by the constant snow and mists. Hearing struggles with the snow dampening sounds and Touch struggles to sense with snow always hindering it from sensing further than normal. Scent is constantly being distracted by the cold air, it makes their airways cold and they'd have to keep breathing in cold air to track a scent. Taste does not have this issue, as it can track an entity by its residue, as long as it took a taste of something, it would be able to track that down.

As you can see, each sense thrives in certain regions. I call these types of zombies as Tribes, as in Tribe of Scent, Tribe of Sight, etc.

Humans can basically live anywhere, they don't have much of an extreme advantage nor an extreme disadvantage in each region.
The narrative function of maps is to explain the specific locations where the characters are and show the possibility of world exploration in future arcs while mapping out potential geopolitical conflicts in the future. I agree with @Paul__Michaels :

"Are these different sections of the world going to drive the story somehow, or will it be something that is in the background and never really addressed?"

If the narrative function of the map is not present from the start or never discussed in the story's narrative, then inserting a map becomes useless.

View attachment 40302

The Map of the Eldora Continent

The Eldora continent consists of 6 regions, each occupied by kingdoms except Land Lost:
  1. In the east of the continent, there is the Rose Kingdom which is famous for its culture, architecture, art and nobility. The kingdom is currently ruled by a council of nobles, with the royal family of El Rose as the symbol of the kingdom. In this kingdom lived Blood Rose and her daughter.
  2. In the middle of the continent, there is the magic kingdom, Magica which has the most prestigious academy, Oxfoed in the world. This kingdom is ruled by a council of elite wizards. The kingdom maintained neutrality for centuries thanks to the existence of the Oxfoed academy where genius students from all countries on the continent gathered and studied magic.
  3. In the south of the continent, there is the Wealth Kingdom, which has the greatest wealth on the continent. This kingdom was led by a rich elite who controlled the kingdom's economy and could even control the continent's economy.
  4. In the north of the continent, there is the military kingdom, the Soldera Kingdom, which has the strongest military power on the continent. The kingdom is ruled by a military junta government.
  5. In the west of the continent, there is a group of autonomous countries that form the Freedom Alliance. The majority of these autonomous countries are republics. The Freedom Alliance was formed to face the Soldera Kingdom, which is ready to invade at any time.
  6. In the southeast of the continent, there is a no-man's land, Lost Land where is a stretch of desert, fog and rocky land. It is said that this land hides the ruins of an ancient civilisation. The Rose, Magica and Wealth Kingdoms are directly in contact with the Lost Land.
Along the coastline of the continent, there is a black area that is barren, foggy and filled with dangerous monsters. It is said that these monsters came from outside the continent and occupied the coastline, but for some reason, they did not invade the mainland of the continent.

Beyond the coastline lies the Endless Sea, which is said to be extremely dangerous and filled with sea monsters. Little is known about the Endless Sea because not many explorers have made it out alive.

Have I ever described this map as setting/worldbuilding?
Yes, it's narratively reflected in the story's setting in each chapter. Even in the prequel, I mapped out the strategic positions between kingdoms and potential future geopolitical conflicts:



Vol 1 Chapter 5: Epilogue – Blood Rose Shakes the Continent of Eldora
Blood Rose: Her Last Mercy was Death by Eldoria

Four Continental Empires Watch

In addition to the Rose Kingdom, there are four great powers that have been maintaining the fragile balance of the Eldora Continent.
They received a message from the Rose Kingdom:
A trembling letter with the royal seal.
It contained an emergency announcement and a wanted poster:

WANTED
wanted

BLOOD ROSE​

The perpetrator of the assassination of Duke Gilles de Vire.
The instigator of extrajudicial judgment.
The extremist who threatens the stability of all kingdoms.
Threat Level: IV - Blightbrand
Bounty: 10.000 gold coins
Died or Alive
The letter was airborne along with dozens of black eagles.
And in every capital city of the great empires, the poster was displayed.
But what happened was not a manhunt. Nor was it a declaration of war.
What happened was…
Silence.



Reaction of the Wealth Kingdom

Sitting on a throne surrounded by gold and graphite engravings of wealth,
Queen Mevalina II frowned as she read the news.

“Duke Gilles is dead? Huh. He owes us a huge debt.”

“And the murderer? She expose the crime? Then who do we blame? The perpetrator, or the revealer?”

The queen sipped her wine with jewelled fingers and chuckled.

“Let’s watch. Let the Rose dance a while longer before we pluck its petals.”



Reaction of the Magica Kingdom

In the Crystalline Glass Tower, the Archmages sat around a blood-colored orb of prophecy.

“Blood Rose… the power to penetrate the palace guards’ magic?

This is no ordinary magic. This is a will bathed in suffering.”

A young magus murmured softly:

“If magic is built from the deepest emotions… she is not just a wizard. She… is suffering itself.”

Magica chose to remain silent. They took notes. Observed.



Reaction of the Soldera Kingdom

The most brutal military empire viewed this case with high alert.

“If such an executioner were to attack our city, who would survive?”

Soldera’s generals began to re-map their cities’ strategies.
They were not interested in who was right or wrong.
They only wanted to know: How to kill the Executioner if she came to their gates?



Reaction of the Freedom Alliance

Among the democratic nations that made up the Freedom Alliance,
debates broke out like embers on dry paper.

“We cannot support extremists! Judgment without trial is the new tyranny!”

“But what if the courts have been bought by the old tyranny?”

Activists secretly distributed Blood Rose leaflets,
describing her not as a killer,
but as a living martyr.

“Blood Rose is not a symbol of death…
But a warning.
That if you fail to hear the voices of the victims,
then the bloody rose will speak for them.”

That day… the whole world did not just read one name.
They shivered at it.
They called her in prayers and curses.
Blood Rose Princess.

She was no longer just a fugitive.
She had become an idea.
And ideas…cannot be killed.



The Disaster Princesses Watch

As Gilles de Vire’s body was still gnawing at the time on the thorny rose stake,
News of his execution had spread like a poisonous fog to every corner of the Eldora Continent.

It was not just the common people who trembled, it was not just the nobles who shivered—
but those who stood outside the law,
those who were called the Disaster Princesses,
those who understood that this world had long since died…
those who knew that blood was but the last language of mankind.



POV: The Third Disaster Princess - Golden Wisdom

Below the underground library of the kingdom of Magica, where forbidden books made sounds when opened and candlelight hung in the air like curious spirits, a girl with short golden hair sat silently amidst the stacks of breathing books.

Her violet eyes held no emotion.

Only calculation.
Only a cold calculation of the crumbling moral fabric.

In her hands: a scroll of reports from the Rose kingdom, sealed in blood and ink.

“Blood Rose… An anomaly that destabilises the continent’s narrative. The public execution of the kingdom’s economic symbol… outside the law, outside the consensus. Is this the beginning… or the correction of the system?”

Golden Wisdom’s voice was almost an echo in the empty room.

Then she looked up at the stone ceiling carved with ancient magic symbols.

Marry El Rose… I wonder… what anomaly you will form from that wound, my sister.”

She didn’t smile. Didn’t cry.
Merely plotting possibilities.



POV: The Fourth Disaster Princess - Equality Princess

In the centre of the white marble hall of the Alliance’s People’s Council, among the senators debating morals and laws, sat a girl with fiery red hair, disguised as a promising young senator.

Her hand propped up on her chin, her smile was gentle yet dangling like a knife dancing over the flames. No one knew that behind her gentle smile, she was a living disaster: Equality Princess - Revia.

“Blood Rose has killed the hero of finance,” whispered one of the senators.

“But who made her a hero? Who counted her worth?”

Revia asked softly, slipping into the discussion like sweet poison. In her heart, she neither hated nor admired Blood Rose. She waited.

“Will she judge criminals of all classes… or only the tyrants above? Will that judgment be neutral, or still biased?”

Revia did not want the world cleansed by one bloody hand. She wanted the scales burned, then rebuilt.

“We will meet, sister. Amidst the flames of law and blood,” she whispered in his mind.



POV: The Eldest Disaster Princess - Earth Mother (Mother of the Disaster Princesses)

In a hidden place nestled in the heart of an ancient jungle. There grew a world tree whose trunk pierced the clouds, on one of its branches, sat a beautiful green-haired woman.

Her green eyes stared up at the sky sadly. She did not read the scrolls. She felt—through the weeping roots of the tree, through the flowers that screamed as the blood of children was spilt.

“Marry… so this is the path you chose.”

Earth Mother’s voice was fragile, but the trees bowed to hear her.

“I once guided you in your dreams, now you have awakened… and chosen to walk alone.”

She did not forbid. She did not regret.

“But… be careful, my little rose. Do not let your thorns prick you.”



POV: The Fifth Disaster Princess - Black Mist

In the ruins of a now. Silent city, where the bodies of men lie buried in silence and the bodies of women are shrouded in mist… a woman stands amidst an altar of mist. Black Mist — liberator of women and executioner of the patriarchal world—heard the news as she was erasing the traces of the city she had just:

“Liberated.”

A Shadowmist approached her.

“Your Highness, news has come. The Blood Rose has crucified a noble.”

Black Mist did not answer immediately.
She simply stood in the mist, listening to the sound of the wind and the silent screams in the air.

“The girls…are they tied up in the castle’s underground?”

“Yes, Princess. All of them.”

Black Mist laughed softly. But it was not a happy laugh.
That laughter… a laughter from the wound that finally found an echo elsewhere.

“My sister… You too smell the rotting bones and tears behind the palace.
Finally, someone dances in blood…
not out of hatred, but out of love that cannot be saved.”

She looked east.

“Postpone the next extermination. Send the women to Mist Garden.”

“And… make this city beautiful. Let them sleep… in clean dreams.”

Shadowmist bowed.

“What shall we do next, Princess?”

Black Mist smiled thinly, mist dancing around her.

“I wish to see Blood Rose’s face. Perhaps… she is the only one who can touch this wound.”



Meanwhile Marry...

POV: Unknown — A Shadow in Plain Sight


While the world was in turmoil,
while Gilles’ blood had yet to dry on the streets,
while kings argued in palaces of marble and lies—

—in a nameless corner of the world,
in a musty tavern filled with smoke and the stench of alcohol,
where the light was weaker than the liquor served,
A black-haired girl sat silently.

Her face was hidden by the shadow of a shabby robe’s hood.
Her eyes were dark, not reflecting the light of an oil lamp.

Before her:
a bowl of thin soup with almost no taste,
a piece of bread as hard as stone, held by time.

She ate slowly.
Without a sound.
Without involvement.
All around her, the world spoke.

“Blood Rose is a ruthless killer! If we lose Gilles, the country could fall!”

“The nobles are rotten. At least… someone dared to act.”

“Shhh! Be careful! The wanted posters are out! Who knows, there might be a spy here!”

“One… ten… thousand… gold coins, they said…”

“Crazy. If I can catch Blood Rose, I’ll retire!”

“Do you want to die? She’s not human…”

One table. Two tables. Five tables.
All repeating the same name:

Blood Rose. Blood Rose. Blood Rose.

But the girl sitting in the corner—
the girl they talked about,
they cursed, they made a myth and a curse—
simply sipped her soup.

She smiled faintly.
Not out of pride.
Not out of anger.
But because… the world had lost control of the narrative.

In her mind,
not anger, not arrogance,
but a city covered in rain.
Rain City.

“Rain City, I wonder what kind of play you are playing today…”

And no one knows,
that the girl who is silent in the corner of the tavern—
is the one they worship in prayers for justice,
the one they condemn as a terrorist,
the one they hunt with swords and money.

Marry El Rose.
Blood Rose Princess.


But for those who understand the meaning of wounds…
she is not a killer.
She is the law in the form of a rose.

Silent.
Soft.
But piercing.

When her steps leave the tavern,
No one looks.
No sound of warning.
No acknowledgement.

Only a silver coin was left on the table—
The only evidence that truth once sat with lies in the midst of a drunken world.

And like a shadow
She is gone.
They contribute mostly by presenting what kind of Zombies you would likely encounter in the area, each type thriving in certain regions.

Not to mention that Zombies would mutate according to their environment.

In Wellen, expect Zombies that have aquatic adaptations. Ones with fins, or something as ridiculous as water jet propulsions.

In Phynell, expect Zombies with long limbs, prehensile tails or something as ridiculous as multiple limbs and fingers as long as their entire bodies to climb trees.

In Malis, expect Zombies with large strong legs to traverse the environment. Or some with even flight, some with wings and some that work via the skill system, Skills are a pseudo-magic in this world and the only system in this world.

In Kingshell, expect Zombies with long ears, legs built for jumping and dense arms that could control their impact. Jumping from mountains to mountains, or some cave zombies which might have enhanced echolocation.

In Zekka, expect zombies either with fur or a ton of hair. Their feet are padded to allow easy movement within the snow, their sizes are also huge. There are even ridiculous things such as Zombies with extreme heat resistance, living inside the massive lava pool, adapted to swimming on dense magma.
 
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