thoughts on my synopsis for contest story

scribesaga

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I'm tempted to do the exploration space option for the scribblehub contest. It's also going to have some smut ;)

There will be space exploration, dogfights, and several fun characters revolving around the main character, Catherine Chase.

I just want to run this concept by the community to see if anyone is remotely interested in the story idea.

Synopsis

A young woman, Catherine Chase, is an aspiring mercenary with dreams of joining the colonial resistance on the distant colony world of Sinmore. In order to get there, she must acquire a place on board the colony ship, "The Star of Argon". Eager for adventure, she reluctantly applies for a position as a 'comfort liaison' for one of the vessels officers. After spending the first six months in a chemically induced cryo sleep, Catherine awakens to the shocking discovery that she's somehow been transformed into a futa. What's worse, she feels her bodies mutations are only getting worse. With a new grown appendage surging between her legs, Catherine must do her best to live up to her obligations as a 'comfort liaison', without losing her mind in the process. Before the colony ship arrives, it comes under attack by the feared pirate ship "Daughter of Silesia". Can Catherine rise up to become the soldier she always dreamt of being? Or will she fall prey to the Silesia's pirate queen, and her sultry machinations?

let me know what you think.
 

Anon_Y_Mousse

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First of all, change the last part, a synopsis should answer questions, not ask them imo. Well, actually scratch that, it may work out depending on the tone of your story, but it I feel the questions here are somewhat unecessary. I haven't read your story so I can't really tell you if the synopsis fits the plot or not.

As for your story, it's sci-fi, BUT from the synopsis I can tell it's smut, so if you play your cards right you can get a good amount of readers.

Edit: There's a thread on story feedback for comments on one's synopsis btw. May wanna go there
 
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