Thoughts on my cover, synopsis and first 2 chapters.

[Jacks]

Hi, new author that just started my first series on Scribble Hub. I'm excited to share my story with you all.

I would like your feedback on the cover I made for my series.
My friend and I made this, we were going for a novel cover that were closer to the style of Chinese Xiaoshuo/ Light novel.

Here's also the link to my series for the feedback on synopsis and chapters: Jade Edge

Feedback may include on the style of the cover art, grammar, words used, story progression.
Thank you!!

 

[C_A_D_M_U_S]

About your book cover, the typography is a bit messy...and there's just too much going on. Also, the fade-out effect on the background (the girl) doesn't make the book cover pop out. I recommend reducing the text or if you still want all of those texts on the cover, rearrange them. Something like these maybe?

As for your synopsis, it's good that it's short and concise. I like the mysterious vibe going on. But, I feel like there's still something lacking. Like, there's no....impact. Btw, I read the first 2 chapters and made some comments (sorry if I kinda went technical).

 

[Jacks]

About your book cover, the typography is a bit messy...and there's just too much going on. Also, the fade-out effect on the background (the girl) doesn't make the book cover pop out. I recommend reducing the text or if you still want all of those texts on the cover, rearrange them. Something like these maybe?

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As for your synopsis, it's good that it's short and concise. I like the mysterious vibe going on. But, I feel like there's still something lacking. Like, there's no....impact. Btw, I read the first 2 chapters and made some comments (sorry if I kinda went technical).

It's okay, I've just read your comments and I'm very thankful for your inputs.
Yes, I do struggle with making a good synopsis as I do not know what to put without revealing too much of the story.
I'll find some time to work on the cover too, thanks for the examples shown :D