Thoughts and feedback on my light-hearted lewd comedy story first chapter?

CZ2

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A piano turned into a girl, I need feedback on for my first chapter

 

SakeVision

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Why is Professional Pianist spelled in capital letters, is it litrpg and Professional Pianist is a class name?
 
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