This is probably my weakest chapter yet

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I don't mean by view count, not at all. It's more like when I wrote this, it just felt kinda mid no matter how many revisions I made. It merely ties up a few loose ends for the next arc, so I wished I could've ended this chapter with a thrilling conclusion like a teamwork fight scene instead of a "big reveal" that amounts to forgettable exposition. Maybe I can salvage it in the future, but I don't know.
I think it's time for me to go back to my fanfic writer roots, where every climax always ended in a no-bars beatdown.
 
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