The Saint is the Villain

[Feylin]

Hiii!! :DDD if you can, please have a review of the chapters! Its still short but i wanna know if its engaging enough

The Saint Is The Villain

NOTICE: the art is AI generated (T0T was messing around with it, didn't think it would save itself there even though I didn't save details) Is it a curse or a blessing? The 'saint' being the villain this whole time, the prince being the true male lead, the side...

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kinda wanna know if its understandable too T0T0T cuz sometimes, my explanations gets wacky since i mostly write at night;;;;
thanks in advanceee!! :DD

 

[Tempokai]

It's good. Too bad the chapters are short for me. While the story is engaging, I'd probably say the pacing is bad. The prologue is understandable, but more context would be good. Chapter 1 and onward could be refined, problem is pacing. Like, I was confused on what was happening at first. You didn't slow down to make the idea of "multiple souls" or whatever to develop fully and jumped to the next thing.

So, develop better pacing and give ideas to develop further, my advice. Be not impatient.

 

[Feylin]

It's good. Too bad the chapters are short for me. While the story is engaging, I'd probably say the pacing is bad. The prologue is understandable, but more context would be good. Chapter 1 and onward could be refined, problem is pacing. Like, I was confused on what was happening at first. You didn't slow down to make the idea of "multiple souls" or whatever to develop fully and jumped to the next thing.

So, develop better pacing and give ideas to develop further, my advice. Be not impatient.

Thank you for the review! I'll do my best in refining it! :DDD