The Relics of Fate Undone

[Mrs.Cochran]

I’m wondering if my story is moving too quickly. I've written introductions for each main character (essentially prologues), and in Chapter 1, they all have a pivotal moment—a realization that they want more out of life. But now I’m unsure how to keep the pacing balanced. Do readers typically enjoy a fast-paced book, or should I slow things down to develop the story more gradually?

Any thoughts on whether I should keep the fast pace or add in some slower moments?

The Relics of Fate Undone

Beneath the eerie silence of an ancient Indian burial ground, an extraordinary group embarks on a perilous quest to uncover the lost city of Atlantis. Aria Pierce, a young witch with powers she barely understands, and Dr. Lydia Cole, a historian obsessed with uncovering lost civilizations, seek...

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[CharlesEBrown]

It varies so widely I'd say proceed as you are, and if you get comments that you need to slow it down. go back and do so.

 

[Mrs.Cochran]

It varies so widely I'd say proceed as you are, and if you get comments that you need to slow it down. go back and do so.

Thank you so much