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KingMusa

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Come check out my magic.battle academy story!! If your are looking for a story to past time with, a story that'll entertain you. Or if you just like Magic Academy stories, come check out my work!

It currently has 23 chapters, and each chapter is less then 2000 words. Easy to get through and a fun read.

Elenora's Academy of Magicka: Ken Granfold

Synopsis:
Eleanora’s Academy of Magicka, crowned as the best institute on the continent of Elenora, is a prestigious magic academy for young wizards alike, to come and pit their magic and might against one another, in the competitive Ranking system the Academy puts them through, in order to polish and forge the Number 1 Ranked Wizard in all of Elenora.

Ken Granfold, a young curious mage who seeks to gain as much knowledge as possible, is enrolled in the famed academy by his Grandfather. During his time at the academy, Ken makes it his sole purpose to graduate as the Number 1 Ranked Wizard.

As Ken fights through the ranking system to be the best, he gains newfound knowledge of who he really is and makes new friends on the way.
 

MasFaqih

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I think the name wang grande is more fitted for young curious mage.
 

Lloyd

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I started reading the first chapter and I'm not a fan. The first dialog is just extremely thinly veiled exposition, and it sucks. It's not natural at all. Instead you could do something like have the dragon ask him if he's going to miss the island, and have him say something along the lines of, no and that he can't wait to get off it.
 
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