The Fallen Gods – Looking for Feedback!

[Quintessa]

Hey everyone!

I’m currently posting 'The Fallen Gods' on another platform, but I’m looking for more readers who can give me feedback to help me improve. If you enjoy fantasy, action, adventure, feel free to check it out!

Synopsis:
[A wandering soul, consumed by darkness, gave birth to the Abyss, spreading corruption across the land. The gods waged war to stop it, but at a heavy cost. In his final act, The One True Being granted mortals the power to resist before vanishing, leaving the heavens silent.

To restore order, the surviving gods created Ausra Nevaeh, yet the Abyss continued to grow. For centuries, mortals clung to fading divine blessings—until the lost Heavenly Palace reappeared, reigniting hope.

From its light, a new savior rises, destined to challenge the Abyss and restore balance to the world.]

I’d love to hear your thoughts! Let me know what you think in the comments or reviews. ?

Read it here: [The Fallen Gods]

 

[LuciferVermillion]

Hey everyone!

I’m currently posting 'The Fallen Gods' on another platform, but I’m looking for more readers who can give me feedback to help me improve. If you enjoy fantasy, action, adventure, feel free to check it out!

Synopsis:
[A wandering soul, consumed by darkness, gave birth to the Abyss, spreading corruption across the land. The gods waged war to stop it, but at a heavy cost. In his final act, The One True Being granted mortals the power to resist before vanishing, leaving the heavens silent.

To restore order, the surviving gods created Ausra Nevaeh, yet the Abyss continued to grow. For centuries, mortals clung to fading divine blessings—until the lost Heavenly Palace reappeared, reigniting hope.

From its light, a new savior rises, destined to challenge the Abyss and restore balance to the world.]

I’d love to hear your thoughts! Let me know what you think in the comments or reviews. ?

Read it here: [The Fallen Gods]

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[Racosharko]

You deleted it?

Just checked

Think the link broke coz changes(?)

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The Fallen Gods

A wandering soul, corrupted by the world’s evil, gave rise to the Abyss, spreading darkness across the land. The One True Being and his gods intervened, battling the Abyss in a devastating war. Though they succeeded in halting its advance, the gods suffered heavy losses. In his final act,...

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[LuciferVermillion]

Do not ask for feedbacks if your book is less than 3 chapters. Do it after it's more than that so we have a better clue on understanding about your story

First, what happened to your cover? Scribble hub, really?

I'm not sure about the 'Isekai' tag. Also saw an 'Artificial Intelligence'.

If you have fantasy in an original world, it's fantasy. If you were transferred to another word, it's Isekai. Please understand the differences.

Now, for the title. The Fallen Gods. I see no problem, except the COVER.

Synopsis.

What does it have to do with The Fallen Gods? I don't know, I don't see the connection.

Contents.

Yes, it's just as what you wrote in your synopsis, perfect. What's next? Because the chapters are too few to judge.

Summary & Guide:

A very classic novel. I could even predict how this goes and ends with my eyes closed.

The problem about these types of classical novel means you've already chose to abandon at least 20% of the story (for me, it's 50%) because it's very classic.

A strong protagonist, the one hero, the person that will save the world. Born at start, prideful, suffers defeat, train diligently, fight again. Final clash, yaaaaaaaah, Abyss dead, restore the world to peace.

If there are cheats, and so on, an instant drop for me.

So what could you focus on?

The progress in between.

Or rather, that's the only thing you could focus.

I don't want to comment too much on that. I would probably know how it goes at well.

P.S. If you are going to write an overworked salaryman/woman getting killed by truck-kun and transfer to another world with cheats, say goodbye to your story. The protagonist is a god, no? Putting an overworked salaryman/woman means it's an irony and a sarcasm.

 

[Quintessa]

Sorry, I’ve been a bit busy and couldn’t upload my chapters. I made a mistake asking for feedback before posting more.

 

[Quintessa]

Hey everyone!

I’m currently posting 'The Fallen Gods' on another platform, but I’m looking for more readers who can give me feedback to help me improve. If you enjoy fantasy, action, adventure, feel free to check it out!

Synopsis:
[A wandering soul, consumed by darkness, gave birth to the Abyss, spreading corruption across the land. The gods waged war to stop it, but at a heavy cost. In his final act, The One True Being granted mortals the power to resist before vanishing, leaving the heavens silent.

To restore order, the surviving gods created Ausra Nevaeh, yet the Abyss continued to grow. For centuries, mortals clung to fading divine blessings—until the lost Heavenly Palace reappeared, reigniting hope.

From its light, a new savior rises, destined to challenge the Abyss and restore balance to the world.]

I’d love to hear your thoughts! Let me know what you think in the comments or reviews. ?

Read it here: [The Fallen Gods]

I’ve released a few more chapters—hope to get some feedback!

 

[Deep__aureate]

High end start