Tell me your thoughts on my story so far.

[Director_Kun]

It is a Isekai following a "magitech" world war 1 commander from a realistic shooter game, to a world where they are expected to fight in a sort of battle royal of species.

Swords & Gunpowder

When the massive online dive multiplayer game shutdown, the players that remained until shutdown weren’t kicked out. However they remained in the game, one small issue their virtual reality was made real and now they have to scrounge for food and fight off enemy hordes who wish for them...

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[Lloyd]

The formatting is all fucked up.

 

[Director_Kun]

The formatting is all fucked up.

Really? What Chapter did you read up to? What do you mean by that exactly?

 

[Lloyd]

There are huge spaces between each sentence

 

[Director_Kun]

There are huge spaces between each sentence

And how is that a problem? I wrote this in google docs over the course of a year and thats what you are taking notice of?

 

[Lloyd]

If you don't see the problem you aren't gonna make it.

 

[Director_Kun]

If you don't see the problem you aren't gonna make it.

Why is it a problem?

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Don't mind Lloyd. He's a troll. Another author here succeeds with that spacing.

 

[Director_Kun]

Don't mind Lloyd. He's a troll. Another author here succeeds with that spacing.

Thank you, I was literally going to go and remove each space but then decided to keep it in just to spite him.
You know what Imma add him as a character then in a future chapter I’ll make sure he dies a brutal horrible death. But also its midnight where I am, and I can’t believe I stayed up for a fucking troll.

 

[Lloyd]

Don't mind Lloyd. He's a troll. Another author here succeeds with that spacing.

Its annoying to read you idiot. That's not trolling. How are you going to ask other people to read your stuff, but not even format it properly? I would be fucking embarrassed if I posted this.

 

[Enkiari]

hmm... The spacing is an issue, but as someone who didn't notice it for the longest time...
People don't actually care, from what I can tell.
I only started correcting it in the recent chapters.
Most of my story was posted with double spacing and people still clicked the story.

 

[Director_Kun]

Its annoying to read you idiot. That's not trolling. How are you going to ask other people to read your stuff, but not even format it properly? I would be fucking embarrassed if I posted this.

Deal with the formatting