System breaker

[Dia779]

Me again, hi

In my many ponderings,

What if there is someone who not only lacks a system, but they can see and also unintentionally destroy them by simply touching the person (on the condition they must hv the system up)?

 

[ThrillingHuman]

like what, you want to write it?

 

[Dia779]

like what, you want to write it?

Still thinking about it tbh

 

[NotaNuffian]

Still thinking about it tbh

Dude. That person would be dead in matters of seconds should any high leveled system user caught wind of him.

From your post, I believe the backdrop to be a world where everyone has a system but the guy, therefore he cannot enjoy its benefits.

Here is my question, what are the perks of being a system breaker other than breaking others' golden finger? This is important. I feel like you are trying to make a Touma, but if everyone else is a superpowered monster while the person is just a nullifier cum castrator normie human being, he is heavily disadvantaged.

 

[Dia779]

Dude. That person would be dead in matters of seconds should any high leveled system user caught wind of him.

From your post, I believe the backdrop to be a world where everyone has a system but the guy, therefore he cannot enjoy its benefits.

Here is my question, what are the perks of being a system breaker other than breaking others' golden finger? This is important. I feel like you are trying to make a Touma, but if everyone else is a superpowered monster while the person is just a nullifier cum castrator normie human being, he is heavily disadvantaged.

For the system breaker, I was thinking more on the line of him/her just being simple minded/not too ambitious.

And they thought everyone's system can be seen.

Until one day they congratulated someone with a system n tapped their shoulder lightly.

Causing error to the system n breaking it, this making it disappear......

"Huh....?" would be their reaction to that.

Also for context, not everyone has them but most hv them. Typical isekai/transmigration ones.

 

[BlackKnightX]

That's a cool scene for sure, but it's hard to execute well. If the MC is a GM-type, he is like a literal god. You can make it work by going the parody route like in One Punch Man, though. Or maybe put the focus of the story on something else.

 

[Zinless]

As Notanuffian said,

Dude. That person would be dead in matters of seconds should any high leveled system user caught wind of him.

If the MC doesn't have anything else besides this ability to break someone's system, I can't really see where the story would go. Once known what his ability is, it'll be next to useless against system users who are aware of it.

As for scenarios that I would find interesting... Maybe he'll be scouted into an army to subdue problematic system users. Or a story where every fight's main goal is to have the MC touch their opponents, but that's all I could think about.

 

[HungrySheep]

I think this would work hilariously as an anti-harem comedy series where the MC accidentally breaks some rando's Super Sexy Sex System (SSSS) and all the girls immediately turn on the dude.

 

[Dia779]

As Notanuffian said,



If the MC doesn't have anything else besides this ability to break someone's system, I can't really see where the story would go. Once known what his ability is, it'll be next to useless against system users who are aware of it.

As for scenarios that I would find interesting... Maybe he'll be scouted into an army to subdue problematic system users. Or a story where every fight's main goal is to have the MC touch their opponents, but that's all I could think about.

Actually, after some more thinking.....

He would be more of a secondary MC to the main MC who would take advantage of said power.

Main MC could be a devious schemer n one who would monopolize said power but is also cautious as to not provoke him.

I think this would work hilariously as an anti-harem comedy series where the MC accidentally breaks some rando's Super Sexy Sex System (SSSS) and all the girls immediately turn on the dude.

And the breaker would be confused as to why they are suddenly attacking him n whether he should leave unnoticed or help the guy.....