Story Review

[SunNation_Alt]

Five Night's at Freddy's: Lost Memories

Hello there, skibidians. I would appreciate it if you could review my story so far. I am a newbie writer, so expect mistakes. :)

 

[HisDivineShadow]

I read several chapters and liked them. The only thing is that I found the text format a bit uncomfortable for me.
If we’re talking about criticism, I guess I don’t really have any. Well, maybe I’d trim a few things here and there, and the text could use some proofreading, but overall, I don’t have much else to add.

 

[SunNation_Alt]

I read several chapters and liked them. The only thing is that I found the text format a bit uncomfortable for me.
If we’re talking about criticism, I guess I don’t really have any. Well, maybe I’d trim a few things here and there, and the text could use some proofreading, but overall, I don’t have much else to add.

I see... Thanks for reading it! I've been needing to know if it was doing good or not.

 

[ICONIFY]

HELLO EVERYONE! Nice to meet you guys my name is Daniel Zeray and I am a new Author here! Always been my dream to become a famous author
I would like to introduce you guys my new novel! Which is called:
The White legacy Check it out Click on the link or click on my book cover! Read the first chapter and let me know if you enjoy it and if you do follow me for more content! rate me out of 5 stars!
I would also love to check out your novels! So send me the link to your novels.
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