Story idea feedback

Tempokai

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Name: "All My Best Friends Are Regressors"
Genre: those popular korean "Tower" novels
Very rough story layout: MC, a not-so-average average E-ranked Hunter/Player/Whatever with his blocked unique ability, has many friends and acquaintances from his 5 years as a Guide. In that web of relationships, four individuals were special enough for MC to consider them best friends.

They were similar to him, the MC, because they were low ranked, and their ability was locked.

And in one ordinary day, four of them had been regressed. Each of them had different future, but in the end...

Humanity was doomed.

And cause was...

The MC.

In order to change the future, they individually will begin to change the future with their actions, sometimes colliding with each other with misunderstanding they got from future timelines. With that, a great chaos ensues...

Featuring characters:
Cold Ruthless OP Swordsman Regressor (former F-ranked crybaby, respects MC only because his future)

Genius Witch OP Regressor (former E-ranked mage with casting issues, terrified of future MC because of her future)

Craftsman King not-so-OP Regressor (former E-ranked apprentice blacksmith, rivalry with his future timeline MC)

Master Sniper OP Regressor (former E-ranked scout, loves MC, terrified of her timeline)

MC: A "Wild Card", can be any class he wants, OP+. Older brother type.

Story will be written with first person MC perspective, with third person in between of those four.

So, how's story idea? Would you read it?

P.S. I wrote that while half sleeping, so if you didn't understood what I wrote, it's ok.
 

YeshuasHeart

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Ooh, I like the idea of the main character being avoided because of the superstition. I would like to see how it turns out from the different points of view in your story.
 
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