Story feedback

[A-Random-Writer]

Could some please give me some feedback on my story so far. I just want to get better at writing stories.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2089332/maybe-my-high-school-life-wont-be-so-bad-after-all/

 

[Eldoria]

Submit your request here. This member is clearly open giving feedback on any fiction.

I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can

What it says in the title I'm pretty new to this, but I think I can still be of some use I'll try to give meaningful and constructive feedback

forum.scribblehub.com

 

[A-Random-Writer]

Ok thanks