Starting a rewrite soon so looking for feedback on my episodic space opera story

[Alwaysrollsaone]

Starship Engineer

This is a tale about a male MC that grew up on an agricultural world but was forced into life in a middling space navy. He has some character flaws. His is a savant, has OCD but also has low emotional intelligence. The story is developing and he is slowly...

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hi all. i am trying to improve some plot aspects of my fast paced space opera story. it had no dialogue, the chapters are 2000 words, and it starts getting fun around chapter 6. i am going into a grammar edit soon (just picked up Grammarly about two months ago) but wouldn’t mind some plot advice. You can post here or at the bottom of chapters.

thanks in advance

 

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First chapter is a bit info heavy for me, if it gets interweaved with some of the forward momentum for chapter 2 it might be better.

Might be , might not , but that be what I think.

 

[Alwaysrollsaone]

First chapter is a bit info heavy for me, if it gets interweaved with some of the forward momentum for chapter 2 it might be better.

Might be , might not , but that be what I think.

Thanks, I tend to do that…info overload. I will try to smooth it out on the rewrite