Started my first novel, need feedback on the prologue and the writing style.

TheTaintedOne

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I have recently started uploading the first edited version after the final draft and hell there was so much to edit. There will be more to edit for final version, yes. But, I haven't received any feedback from any readers, and though about posting it here to get some blessed souls to read it:blob_aww::blob_aww:

 
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