Slay The Cross, an isekai litRPG

[PBJ_Time]

I decided to rewrite my story into a second draft because I felt like I could still improve on my writing. That said, please let me know which works better as a published novel. Thank you!

Slay The Cross (Old)

Slay The Cross Synopsis Hajime is destined to kill every god in the ethereal world of Parallaxis. Sounds cliché, right? Well, he’s far from alone, as today marks the 5,000th annual meeting of the Radical Daydreamers Liberation Front (RDLF). It’s time for the “divine” to meet their maker—if they...

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[melchi]

I think slaying gods is a bad premise for a story. Though the second one isn't rife with grammar errors.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

God slaying is religious sacrilege.

 

[PBJ_Time]

I think slaying gods is a bad premise for a story. Though the second one isn't rife with grammar errors.

I'll make it work somehow, lol. It'll be based on my beliefs with another social issues.

 

[sanitylimited]

thats even worse

 

[Lloyd]

This is disgusting. Find God.

 

[PBJ_Time]

This is disgusting. Find God.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

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I believe what my associate was trying to say is, "This is disgusting. Find God."