Settle a poem debate

[LuoirM]

Me and me friends made some poem about our character's power, and we're dissing each other cus he said mine suck and I also think his ain't nothin' either. Please vote on which one is better, without the knowledge of who's who ofc.

A. (A vampire character)
As skyfalls and sundown, we shall rise;
Unforgivable army of thirsty knights.
Death is only the means to an end,
Sanguimancy Release: Blood Domain

B. (A thunder-theme character)
Rumble and roar, without a sound
When birds soar, a promise I vow
Hear my call, defender of the weak
Let light scatter, reveal the justice that I seek

 

[RepresentingDesire]

The 1 needs better wording.
The 2 needs creativity.

 

[LuoirM]

we came to our differences, we're both shit, now we're gonna hug n kiss, thanks guys