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Forcalor

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She is an immortal figure of authority who goes through a time of great upheaval while being locked in unending cycle of suffering by unfathomable cosmic forces.
 

Representing_Tromba

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Main character is a big, muscly, hairy, wild, Orc. Need I say more? ehehe~
Please say more. This tells me what they are but little else.
She is an immortal figure of authority who goes through a time of great upheaval while being locked in unending cycle of suffering by unfathomable cosmic forces.
Relatable. Why though? What about her makes her suffering worth looking into?
 
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My MC is a dummy witch who will have you killed over laughing, while reeling about how stupid she is. She'll take all of your hatred of dumb characters and figure out a way to wiggle into your heart. She grows as her delusions grow. The people around her can't help but be exasperated and find her cute at the same time. Her antics are sure to keep you turning the page as she goes from a small cave witch to an actress witch, the likes of which you've never seen before.
 

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My MC is very much a normalish girl living a very not-normal life and enduring all the struggles that go with it.

Despite all the challenges, and her anxiety, she is doing her best to remain upbeat and hopeful.

She's a good girl.

:blob_melt:
 

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Relatable. Why though? What about her makes her suffering worth looking into?
She is a talking singing horse, and people love horses


Also
the narrative is an allegory for a semi-realistic depiction of depression and how you may be capable of getting out from it, but shhhhh... it is something I wanted my reader to figure out by themselves
 
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Please say more. This tells me what they are but little else.
Raruk Warwulf, the second son of the chieftain of the Warwulf Clan, was the last ever Oruk born (female Oruks have died out as only males have been born for hundreds of years.) He carries the burden of carving a future for their race through the use of his axe, wit, and a secret some may call a cheat.

But mostly he's big, muscly, hairy, and wild ehehe
 

Little-Moon

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I have sever al MCs but my current most written MC is a former liberal arts student thrown into a fantasy world as the heros twin sister, where she tries to be optimistic despite slowly but constantly loosing parts of her memory.

She tries to live according to the believe of. -I'd rather die myself then a shadow of myself- and somehow to find a way to not only survive but also find the memories she has already lost.

(In particular her pasts lifes families faces.)

Other then that she is petite, has long black blue hair she keeps pinned up with hairpins. Loves a good fight (is not a fan of killing though) collects hair acessories, is a chocolate addict and hates high heels with passion.
 

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Alunya's a naturally talented sorcerer who happens to live in a place that has existed in peace for so long that any semblance of power is intrinsically viewed as a threat! But more importantly, he's very much enveloped in a hostile culture which shapes him in a contradictory way. As the story goes on he becomes more and more repulsed by those around him but rather than becoming cynical or jaded, he becomes increasingly self-assured and confident in his own supremacy. All in all, he was written to help me practice writing characters that can be fun, cute, and energetic, while still having a particular sense of grandiosity and seriousness when it matters, since those were traits I previously struggled to combine. I think that it works pretty well personally.

He starts out cute and innocent, but when he loses his innocence he doesn't just grow up but fights to stay who he is and keep his playful, vibrant spark. The world around him becomes increasingly alien, but he still finds joy and things to love in it. And even when those he loves become threats to his innocence, he holds onto them. He's not delusional, he doesn't hide from reality; he tries his best to understand it, but rejects what he won't live with. He can be tempted to act reckless but he has enough rationality to not just jump off the deep end when he's not ready. There aren't any limits to how far he will go to live in the world he wants to, and he will not accept being degraded nor corrupted.

He wants to learn and expand, to gain a better understanding of the world and the things in it, and not only to learn about them but be able to shape, create, and change them. That drive foments a kind of ambition in him that doesn't necessarily need a specific end goal, save the desire to keep becoming more and shape the world around him. He loves to make things himself, to see the fruits of his labors in reality, and that is more important to him than any kind of luxury or comfort. Becoming better, wiser, smarter, more creative, more vibrant, are all ends in and of themselves as far as Alunya is concerned.

Oh, and also, he's a little brother. Alunya loves his big brother!

I swear to god I actually tear up re-reading the last currently written part of the story with Alunya and his brother Antares.
 

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Slightly autistic internet board user stands for something pure and will use his degenerate knowledge to fight for it.
 

Representing_Tromba

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My MC is a dummy witch who will have you killed over laughing, while reeling about how stupid she is. She'll take all of your hatred of dumb characters and figure out a way to wiggle into your heart. She grows as her delusions grow. The people around her can't help but be exasperated and find her cute at the same time. Her antics are sure to keep you turning the page as she goes from a small cave witch to an actress witch, the likes of which you've never seen before.
This is good
40% of male MC's have huge breasts?
Yeah. Have you never seen JoJos?
My MC is very much a normalish girl living a very not-normal life and enduring all the struggles that go with it.

Despite all the challenges, and her anxiety, she is doing her best to remain upbeat and hopeful.

She's a good girl.

:blob_melt:
Okay
She is a talking singing horse, and people love horses

Understandable
Raruk Warwulf, the second son of the chieftain of the Warwulf Clan, was the last ever Oruk born (female Oruks have died out as only males have been born for hundreds of years.) He carries the burden of carving a future for their race through the use of his axe, wit, and a secret some may call a cheat.

But mostly he's big, muscly, hairy, and wild ehehe
That's more like it!
 
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