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Hi, I've been working on my book for a long time and gradually started publishing chapters.
The genre is a dark fantasy with elements of eroticism and a slice of life. Please review the work and give feedback.
Do you like the development of this story? How natural does the language sound? (I'm not a native speaker and I can't rate it). I would be very grateful for any review.
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The genre is a dark fantasy with elements of eroticism and a slice of life. Please review the work and give feedback.
Do you like the development of this story? How natural does the language sound? (I'm not a native speaker and I can't rate it). I would be very grateful for any review.
The Mad Immortal
A Devil torn from the depths of Hell is reborn in the body of a child and condemns that child to suffering. From his earliest childhood, Grey is drawn into a large-scale conspiracy. He is used. He is betrayed. He is tormented. How is he supposed to survive if he...